All Comments on 'Hubby Comes Home Early'

Man, what a stroy! That is a good one, and I would have loved to be the one that was doing her while her hubby watched!! By your description, sh eis a hot little honey that needs a good hard one all the time.

Very well written. Great story line. Keep up the great work!

Good story, but an unrealistic finish. surely the kick for those of us that dream of catching our wifes fucking one of our friends or a stranger in our own bed would be the confrontation and the reaction when she realises that she's been caught out..

Maybe she could end up fucking them both or comfesing to all those times she's been unfaithfull to the husband.

Good story though till the end.

Seeing my wife fucked by a big hard cock is one of my favorite fantasies. Having her moan and groan as he fucks her good and fills her pussy (and hopefully her mouth, too, at some point) is something I've always wanted to see and hear. Thanks for writing such a well crafted and erotic tale!

Nick and Tanya

Knowing my wife was a complete faithless, betraying, lying, cheating slut. It is great being married to a 24/7/365 slut. I dont really have to worry. I know she can always get someone to fuck her and we go for testing every two weeks to know when we finally have the AIDS infection that will kill us.

I have watched my wife get fucked by a big cock. Friends of ours joined us in a night of fun and fuck and my buddy's cock filled her cunt and her mouth. I of course watched as I fucked his wife. There is nothing like this kind of experience! I've watched her eat pussy and drive women wild.

She needs to be dumped she cheats themn lies to hubby while he can see from the next room him and his stupid fantasies he should just take his picture and divorce her

I dream of seeing my wife do this very thing. I know there ios a slut hiding in her.

The husband wants to watch his wife get fucked by another man, but the way he does it is sickening. He lets his so called friend Mark, who is not really his friend at all. A man who fucks another man's wife while she is talking to him over the phone is a creep and the husband that lets him do it is a faggot. He really wants to suck the other mens cocks, Just like you do mr writer. A real cocksucker sucks cocks because he likes them and he is man enough to admit it to himself. The husband is a wimp and a disturbed man...no we'll take his balls away, he's no man and neither is the writer because he uses the story to further his desire to be humiliated and cukold by another man. His friend is a good one...who better to degrade a man, there goes that word again. Actuallt neither Mark nor the husband nor the writer are men ...they are enuchs, balless wonders. I think they should all have a party and suck each other assholes. A dick is too good for a faggot like the husband to suck...

I have always wanted to see my wife get fucked by a big cock. My cock is just over 5.5 inches and and not very thick. It has always made me wonder if she would enjoy a really big one.

I watched my wife fuck my best friend one night on our living room floor. They thought I had passed out from drinking too much. It was the most erotic thing I have ever witnessed. They continued this relationship after I gave my consent and encouragement to my wife. They usually met in a motel near his work.

friend of mine. I didn't stand around fretting like this husband did. I went right in and knocked the hell out of him while he was still in her. They called the police and the police looked at the cheating couple and laughed. "Got him good didn't you...that's good...we don't feel like protecting cheaters besides the guy will get off in court by claiming that he was temporarily insane by his wife and friend's cheating. Of course this husband is so worried about ketting them know that he's home. Man what a looser. Only a loser could write a story like this and whiskey drunk you are a loser. I have balls you don't I actually think all your stories stink...how do you like that retard...bezelcrix@yahoo.com

wife gets screwed and he does nothing. they both get what they deserve it seems.

. . . why does he read "all" your stories and then complain about them? Go figure.

Kathy is a mindless hot bitch. I wouldn't be in Troy's spot, hell hardly anyone would. But this is a story about his particular fetish. Well, isn't it? Pretty good writing if it can make the flamers continue to read!

irchristo@yahoo.com

all of you guys who commented that either have watched or would like to see you,re wife should get the chance,these have to be the wimpest men there are,if my husband walked in on me and acted like this I,d never want him to touch me again ,It would be much worse than being kicked out of my home and being divorced, if he didn,t divorce me I sure would him,I,t would tell me he never had loved me and didn,t care at all who used me ,I don,t understand how any real man could look at himself in the mirrior after watching some guy having his wife and him allowing it,How could he stand to look at his friends ,knowing they all know,and they will know because guys talk,

I can say from experience that there is nothing more erotic and arousing than watching another man fuck my hot sexy wife. Our friend has been fucking my wife for the past couple of years and she loves it because his cock is a lot bigger than mine and he makes her cum more often.

For the commenter who speaks from "experience," I suspect he's had a little experience in up close and personal time with his "loving wifes'" lover. Beats me...maybe some guys get married, then come out of the closet some years later, but it kills the concept of marraige when the hubby is a competitor against the wife for some strangers cock. Pretty nasty shit....

are pretty pathetic. It's a fucking story for heaven's sake. I think it takes a pretty selfish and childish attitude to allow yourself to be so possessive and jealous. No man owns his wife, and no wife owns her husband. If it's their marriage, they can make the rules as to what is acceptable and what isn't to them both.

Whiskey, you are one sick MF--How can you write such CRAP.

I think he should tune her up a bit. A good belting across her ass while she is tied to the same bed she let old Troy fuck her. Beat her ass so that when she sets 6 months later she still can feel the pain. As for his friend Troy, Just nut the bastard for cheating on you with your wife. He betrayed you more than she did

I gave you a twenty-five, only because you write well. Your story stops stupidly. Do an Epilogue: ie: They get up to clean up and he is standing in the hallway glaring at them...why? First you wrote he was finally going to get his wish about seeing his wife get fucked...then, he had to find out if she would lie, which she did. She also ridiculed him. NOW, any guy whose Company flies him out of town for business is not an ill-educated loser so, maybe his was up for a fantasy but lies, cheating and humility...NO WAY, he beats the lover badly, slaps the wife, takes her rings off and throws her cheating, lying ass out. So much for fantasies!!!

As soon i read "My cock was throbbing painfully in my pants" I stopped reading because I knew it was just another story written by a queer that likes to see big dick fucking a woman.

Skipping through the comments, I never realized that there are so many "sick" fucks in this world. Most of you readers need a shrink to straighten out your fucked up brains. Why are you assholes married?

then he goes in and kicks her out and starts the process to have an 'ex' and an 'ex' (best) friend

Pure crap.

The Writer is obviously a faggot little coward. Total shit story. Then all of this faggots stories are crap.

Premise is trite and execution is basic. Dialogue is generally poor and the denouement is unknown!

2.7 = 3*

I can understand (not condone) cheating.

Sort of understand open marriages

And even the husband getting off on watching wife.

But a husband who gets off that his supposedly loving wife is cheating and whoring herself with his good friend .... That's a little much to take!

I gave it a 3 .... Only because I personally don't like the husbands reaction!

If you had a different ending ... I would have given a 5

now its time to stand up or step out, TK U MLJ LV NV

I would like to hear that her husband got together with Mark's wife for some revenge for both of them, seems only fair if one can do it so can the other.C

another fucking cuck..

Pathetic shit! Stop polluting LW.

Hate Cucks, hate women who Cuck their men, hate asswipes that talk about the husbands of the worthless cunts they fuck.

BDEarth

"Nothing!" Kathy replied, "I just had a cramp in my leg. It hurt, so I groaned. Honey? Can we talk tomorrow; I'm really busy, uhhh, sleepy right now." As she continued to lie to me, she spread her firm thighs wider and shoved her shaved cunt hard and harder onto Mark's probing cock.

"I can't sleep." I responded somewhat sullenly on the phone. "I was kinda horny and I just woke up from this weird dream." I started walking, continuing "I was hoping we could "play" some. I dreamt that you were naked in our bed, me on one side, your lover in the other, waiting for him to stick his dick in your arse and mine in your twat. Double penetration. You look so sexy being stuffed with hot, throbbing cocks from every angle. Tell me how much you want a threesome, tell me how my slut want two cocks pounding brutally in her at once, call out my name and tell me you want both of us flooding every hole with come, all at once..." While I was still talking, I was walking naked out of the guest room and into our bed, my penis throbbing at the thought of stuffing this whore with all the cock she truly deserves. Mark looked startled when he looked up and saw me in the flesh, sticking my dick into Kathy and asking her to fuck us both like a porn star. "Just play along with this, Mark, and continue", I groaned, pushing him back into the bed as he tried to pull away. "We've had this fantasy for a while and figured that you were the only one versatile enough and open-minded enough to help us pull this off. *wink* Kathy is a nymphomaniac slut, a bitch and a whore who loves to be stuffed with cock in every orifice. If you want to stay in our bed, you will take your cock and stuff her arse with it, right now, while I take sloppy seconds in her twat. Tell her what a slut she is and stick your dick in her bottom, it really turns her on to be treated like a whore and banged hard..."

The look on her face when she hung up the phone and my voice continued was priceless, but was nothing compared to the look on Mark's face when he saw my dick erect and ready for action. I'm glad my smartphone has a video camera.

At that point, one of two things happen. Either Mark attempts to play along and continue (in which case he's a very brave man) or he is so horrified at the thought of having been tricked into having sex with both of us that he crashes through our bedroom window naked in a shower of broken glass in his haste to escape.

I know what you're going to say. You're telling me that I am a lunatic and just completely destroyed our primary relationship with this stunt. I don't see it that way and really don't care. Why? Even if I play this straight, barge in and demand a divorce, our relationship is fucked anyway. The result can't be worse and nothing I say at this point actually matters, so why not have some fun and go out with a "bang"?

It must be brilliant to see your wife completely naked with another man, and taking his big fat cock in every orifice. You know what pleasure he is experiencing whilst inside your wife, and the pleasure she feels - that fullness and stiffness of a real man's penis inside her satisfying her throughout. Seeing their naked bodies coupled tightly together. WOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW.

I gave this story a 5- (4.65/5.0 = 93% = A)

You must be as sick as your character!

worthless ass story, there was no story.

Absolute bloody crap !!

No background info so just no story. 1 star is generous.

How long has the cheating been going on. Were they plotting further devastation on her husband and/or his wife? Why did she enjoy doing things for Mark that she didn't do for her husband? Did they get off on secretly cuckolding her husband? Were they secretly draining his assets? Were they thinking about getting her pregnant and having her husband raise their bastard child?

Wish there were more stories in this series. Yours and NaughtyNurse18 are my favorite authors.

What you wrote was highly erotic if wife watching is your fantasy but the stoy needs more details for the rest of your readers.

Another writer selling the life and times of a selfish slut and a clueless cuck. So many writers on this site must be bisexual or into humiliation. A real man doesn’t stand there and watch. He takes photos or videos for the divorce filing and then delivers a nasty surprise for the slut and her lover.

I was going to arrive home 5 hours earlier than expected I was expected to be home close to midnight but I was going to be there by 7 so I thought it would be a good surprise 2 my wife Deb and four children. It was winter time so it would be dark when I got home but it would give us a couple hours before getting the children ready for bed. When I arrived at our house there was a street car in our driveway. The house was dark except for our bedroom. I thought that was strange or just our bedroom to have a light with four children and my wife at home I would think there would be a lot more light on. Where the strange car was parked it was not possible for me to put my car in the garage so I parked out on the street down just a little from our house walk to our house walk-in heard the alarm chirp so I know it was set immediately I get the code to shut it off. Then I went up the steps and down the hall to our bedroom quietly just in case it was an intruder. As I got close to our door I could hear my wife moaning this really got my attention. We always kept a ball back behind the bedroom door for security just in case we ever needed it. I really didn't think it was an intruder I thought it was maybe my wife's lover that I didn't know about. I grabbed the ball bat and hit the man in the bank pretty heart knocking him down onto my wife then I hit him again in the site I knew that I had to have done some damage my wife seen me and screamed there was a tie evidently from this van laying on the floor I grabbed it and wrap it around his wrist to tie him grab a t-shirt off of the floor and crammed it into his mouth. I was actually putting on a show acting like my wife was being raped just to see how she would react I grabbed her and hug her and told her that she was going to be all right that I was going to call the police. She was crying and that we needed to talk. I was still putting on a show telling her to settle down that everything was going to be okay that the police would take care of him that he would probably be charged with breaking and entering and rape. She was still crying and saying we really need to talk please listen to me. I looked at her as if I was in shock and said go ahead and talk. He began to talk explaining that Jim was a guy from work and he had been flirting with her quite a bit and that this was the first time that they had been together. I said what you are telling me that you've been having an affair what is it you are liking that you had to treat me like this all you would have had to have done was told me you wasn't satisfied and I would keep the children so that they would not be a problem to you and you can go on your Merry way I asked where our children was at she said that they were at her parents I said I would go get them and she could take care of Loverboy and we would be out of her life turd and walk out the door. We had a prenup before we got married so the one who cheated had to leave and the other got everything Lock Stock Barrel and children. No cuckold here. We need some writers to represent us men who will not tolerate this kind of BS.

Yes I came home 1 day early late at night strange truck in front of our garage being cautious I pulled out my 9mm that I always carried I have my concealed to carry permit and flash light and started checking things out. Her car was in the garage I was getting scared till I looked in our master bedroom there was my wife Tammy with a guy I didn't know. I started making a plan. I called 911 reporting a possible break in that I was going home and seen a strange truck in my drive. I was asked if anyone was in the house that I knew? I said I didn't know that earlier I talk to my wife and she said they may have stayed at her parents tonight. They said they would send someone right away. I hung up and called Tammy cell asking where she was she said at home in bed why what's going on I said stay calm I said I just drove by and seen a strange truck in our drive get out of bed very quietly and prop a chair up against the door hid in the closet and secure it the way I had shown her and that the law was on the way I could see them on our street and told her. She said O S___! I said don't worry everything will be ok the sheriff is here. I hung up. I offered to unlock the house but the 2 sheriff deputies said to give them the key I did. They went in I waited outside shortly 1 deputy came out and asked me to come in. I went in and in our living room sat Tammy and the unknown guy I went to Tammy fast asking are you ok without waiting for an answer I looked at the deputies asking why wasn't the guy didn't the guy have handcuffs on? One answered maby my wife should answer that. I looked at Tammy and asked why? She said she was sorry. I asked sorry for what? She said for cheating on me. I asked was it worth it? She asked what did I mean? Our marriage our children. I was getting upset the deputies seen and told me to settle down. I asked if they would be calm in this situation? Not really but we have to do our job now are you going to settle down? I said I would if Tammy agreed to leave and honor our prenuptial agreement. Tammy looked at me crying I waited then finally said I take it that I won't start to calm down until she leaves. Our prenuptial agreement cheating spouse walks away without anything including children. Finally she got up crying how sorry she was. I asked who was the home wreaker she just cried louder. I said I really didn't care unless he is the father of any of the children. She started crying louder again. About 6 months later at the final court date after everone was putting me through H___ I dropped the divorce and let her move back in but in spare bedroom.. It took a while before I let her back in the master bedroom. We talked a lot then a while longer to start getting intimate again. Then we started making love again but she knew Point Blank if anything but I was just speaking of you better have a good breezes or it would be finalized.

Skipped the story entirely. It could not possibly be as good as the comments.

I hate stories were the husband see his wife having sex with another man and either gets a hard on, or quietly sneaks away and does nothing at that time. It indicates to, that the husband doesn't really love his wife as much as he thought. When I come to the part of story that either situation is happening, I immediately stop reading that story and move onto the next one.

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Sissy Troy needs to strip down and beg big Mark to fuck him too! Such a pathetic wimp! Or, he can man up, use a baseball bat on Mark and throw cheating slut Kathy out on the street naked!

No it wasn't my fantasy of watching my wife with another guy. I might have been able to accept her with another woman. After this happened I told her if she wanted to try and work to save our marriage we would fill out one of my fantasies for. She agreed but she was discussed and said I would never happen again either of our fantasies. When I caught her at a party bent over and letting a young guy screw her she was pretty drunk. She was actually calling him Bobby my name. I still had to get my pound of flesh and slugged the asshole a few times. I walked away leaving him lay. She straightened herself up and joined me. Shortly we left and went home. We seem to be good but I will keep my eyes open. I'm not going to tolerate BS. Not interested in being that stupid.

First time and last. I sued for divorce.

Finish the dammed story .

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"... Was I finally going to see a guy fucking my wife in my own house?"

I prefer stories with conclusions!

I AM COPY PASTING ANON COMMENT THAT I REALLY CAN RELATE TO.

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Anonymous, over 17 years ago

Very hot story!

Seeing my wife fucked by a big hard cock is one of my favorite fantasies. Having her moan and groan as he fucks her good and fills her pussy (and hopefully her mouth, too, at some point) is something I've always wanted to see and hear. Thanks for writing such a well crafted and erotic tale!

Nick and Tanya

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