All Comments on 'Amnesty Program Ch. 05'

by Ambidentrous

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AverygoodlayAverygoodlayover 10 years ago
Good

Good, but not as great as the first stories were.

PeterspeterPeterspeterover 10 years ago
The hell you say.

Not as good? Man you have no sense of eroticism at all if that's really what you think. There's a stroke component, a tantalising up and down emotion, and some real detail. What more do you want? We have a WRITER here, so let's be encouraging.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Keep writing!

Write the next one! I don't care much for Nathan but want to find out if they make it to Friday.

redlion75redlion75over 10 years ago

whats wrong with nathan? he didnt take advantage of the b.j. he was really wanting to get to know her and see where it could go.he seems like a smart guy with the sense tech thing and they are getting along like a new couple not fuck buddies.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Excellent

If only they made movies like this story.

This is my favorite series on Literotica, keep up the great work!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
THE MOST EROTIC LOVE BEGINS IN THE MIND

I love the cerebral eroticism in this story. The conversations are as real as it gets for two very intelligent people. I also love the slow transition from the analytical to the emotional when Jason refused to say no to making love to Rebecca and I love why he refused. Very loving and erotic at the same time. BRAVO! Kim in Kansas

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Excellent series

Love the expansion to Emily and Nathan.

I find the project interesting and want to read more, Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Please please please keep writing

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Begging

please find your way back to this story.

FarmerJGDFarmerJGDover 9 years ago
Waiting

I am waiting for chapters 6,7,8,9 and 10. This was such a wonderful story and very well written. I like the way they all had sex, but yet didn't have sex. It makes the person reading, more into the story, keeps their attention, and wanting more. Well done and I hope to read more. Thanks for posting this. Jim

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Love it, but where's the rest?

Fantastic story so far... I hope you'll finish it eventually!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
love it

probably the best erotic story on the internet. don't leave me hanging!

well, not hanging...

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
more please

It's been awhile since I'd read this story and it was delight to read it again but I would really like to the read more of this story

crmdpdcrmdpdover 5 years ago
More please, sir

A wonderfully brilliant set. Such terrific character development and inventive scenes. It would be a delight to read Chapter 6.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Amazing!

This may be an erotic story, but it just never fails to make me laugh. It’s the perfect combination of love, sex, and a few parts of comedy. Please do keep writing! You’ve got us all hanging! This story is just so cute and it never ceases to amuse me! 💖

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Good stuff

I see where this was posted

12/2013 I hope Ambidentrous is alive and well and would

Appreciate you finishing the masterpiece you started

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Another countless abandoned story?

So tired of encountering uncompleted storys in Lit, *sigh*

DeLord12804DeLord12804over 3 years ago

AWWww!!! Another deadend story... why don't these things self delete after 5 years?

pcman1950pcman19504 months ago

Sorry to see this tale end. Excellent series nonetheless.

AnonymousAnonymous1 day ago

Erotica or not, you are a FANTASTIC writer!! I would have read this entire series even if it hadn't included the fabulously detailed sex scenes. I didn't pay attention to the series details and had intended to comment here, where I thought was likely somewhere in the middle of the series, and then saw the comments indicating that this was the last installment. I'm sure you got carried away with life's distractions as there is still plenty of meat on these bones and several future installments are obvious. Though disappointing that you've abandoned these well-developed characters, I just wanted to thank you for sharing this truncated journey. A very enjoyable read, indeed, and fully worth the 5 stars I gave for each chapter. Thank you Ambidentrous, and best of luck wherever you are!

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