All Comments on 'Her Mind Wanders...'

Can't wait until the moment they actually watch each other cum as they've both dreamed

A very good story very well written. Keep writing. You have talent.

Not sure how to change the title, but submit a question to the Forum. Someone out there will have the answer.

Good story so far, but where's the third one :o

i neeeed a third one! :)

These 2 Alice/Laura stories are so cute & natural in their theme of self-discovery, not to mention that they both are so well written. Hope you keep the adventure going into the next chapter at least, if not even more.

Wow. Thank you for showing me a new way to masturbate. Love the story.

If you want to edit your story, simply rewrite it the way that you want, whether it be a single word or two, such as "part one" in your title, or fixing any other errors that you spot.

Once you are happy, submit your story just like you did with your original version, but you need to use "edited" in your title.

If you read the instructions when you submit your stories, it will explain this procedure somewhere stating precisely how to word your edited title so the publishers will know to replace your old story with an updated version, good luck.

I have edited my first story because I made a few mistakes, and this is how I did it.

Super sexy, love the idea of women getting off on the thought of each other!🔥