All Comments on 'Mrs. O'Malley's Golden Juices Ch. 03'

This writer has posted a multitude of good stories but this one left me wondering why Mrs. O'Malley's tirade did'nt at some point turn into a pleasurable experience for both her and her grandson.

The "deliciously dominant treatment" from his "sexy old grandmother" could well have left them both nicely gratified.

Nevertheless I must give the story full marks for the quality of the writing..

In comparison to your normally readable stories ,was fucking crap.

Hope he kills the old bitch or maybe she dies while shitting on his face and suffocating him. Please author take these suggestions in mind when preparing your next chapter. I am sure this will improve the storyline.

don't listen to the other comments, this storie was awsome!

This story was little more than rape and abuse with very little erotica thrown in. At least, chapters 1&2 included some mutual gratification, whereas, this was an old woman torturing and then raping her grandson. Some might find this erotic, but I am not one of them.

Fingering my whore cunt to this in the back of a Bible study class. That Mrs O'Malley is so nasty. I want to be her