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Walking The Path Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by BobNbobbi12/26/13

Complexity on the rise

Collin getting better at golf, but Nick still wins in the end when the old Collin shows up on the 16th hole??? Nicole decides she wants a husband once again, at least some of the time so she takes the tube and the panties away. Collin says Nick has to ask for sex but Nicole has already had her husband with no request to the master. What's the deal with John? This is the second time he has told Nick a story about Nicole getting with or showing off to other guys while out with Collin??? Nick brings the lady's drink, a cosmo is nothing but a pink martini that only ladies drink, to Collin and almost no reaction. Unexplained or resolved stuff is going on in the story.

The story ambles along nicely. Adding another woman to the mix has got to increase the scheduling problems which means Nick's sex life just got reduced in frequency again. I do like the conversation at the start of this post about Nick and Nicole's current marital situation. I do think something is still lurking unsaid, not revealed yet by Collin. I can't see what it might be, but something else is out on the horizon. I guess we just have to wait and see what JayCuck has coming next.

Good job as usual.

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by Hyakinthos12/26/13

(Please excuse me for my bad english, but I'm no native speaker) I really love to read your stories!
I'm now for a few years in a relationship with a girl and recently we started a similar relationship as the one you described in your story.
All the worries but also the delight you describe that Nick gets out of it apply for me too. You are describing his psychological situation really realistic and imaginable. Your story is for sure one of the best I read at Literotica. I'm really happy that you don't reduce the people in clichés but that you develop iridiscent characters.
Your story really helps me to deal with the situation I really love (and sometimes fear a little bit). In the last chapter I was really annoyed with the pantys Nicole made Nick to wear and now I'm really glad that he could assert his claims in this point.
I cant await to see the direction the story will take at the end.

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by JayCuck12/26/13

Anon....

Where have you been??

I missed your sunny and bright disposition.

I'm happy you are back to reading my stories. It's fairly obvious you enjoy them and that's ok. Now just go wash your hands, take a shower and call your doctor for a refill of your prescription.

Take care.

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by Anonymous12/26/13

Better

Added characters give Nicole more chances to indulge herself and make me wonder where things will go . Nicole is letting Nick know what she wants and is doing it with respect. They may make mistakes and hurt their marriage with this game but they are doing it with their eyes open and won’t have anyone but themselves to blame. A good read, I give it a 5.

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by Anonymous12/26/13

Man

you're who need some medicine for your mental illness.
I live a happy life with a beautiful wife and four children.
I have a good job and many dear friends
I did not need anything else, and you should seriously think to visit with a psychiatrist because a person who writes something of this sort is able to process it in his sick head.
Do not worry, medical science has made great progress and be able to do something useful, even a hopeless case like yours

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by Anonymous12/26/13

Excellent as always

Great job, thanks for getting this chapter out early! When I saw it posted I felt like I got a Christmas present. The new character, and the playroom, both provide lots of new opportunities. I do see Colin getting jealous and more possessive. John is still a wildcard, and what will happen when Nicole does more and more without talking to Nick? How about a tattoo, or piercing at Collins insistence? I see poor Nick getting completely shaved below the neck... perhaps a group picture of the three of them naked.... that is really humiliating to Nick.
And of course the golf bet that Nick and Collin will make, that will be another long step into submission.. that is when Nick will finally loose on the golf course, and lose more of himself
I look forward to more clean up chores on both Nicole's holes, and Colin becoming a real demanding DOM in the bedroom... so many ways to go... such fun.. what a great story Jay.. I love that it can go so many ways..... and as always you write beautifully...
Thank YOU!

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by rainbow00112/26/13

Moving along

Your writing is again very good from a technical perspective. The story arc seemed to shift as well and IMO in a good direction. You let Nicole take back a lot of the power in her life and in her relationships. That is the very definition of a hotwife, not some female that allows any man to order her around outside of the bedroom. That was always a developmental flaw in the story arc of her character. Thank you for sharing as always.

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by JayCuck12/26/13

Anon

You Have:
A beautiful wife
Four great kids
A great job and many friends.

Why then do you visit this site and leave hateful, spiteful and evil feedback?
If you're life is so fantastic...why are you here at all?

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by Anonymous12/26/13

Just Because

Because he doesn't really have all those things and imagining people who are happy in alternative lifestyles makes Anon vewy vewy angwy.
Keep up the good work Jay.....

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by Spec12312/26/13

Another good chapter!

It's a good chapter but I really feel like this hole Cynthia thing is happening way to fast. She just happens to be agreeable to all of Nicole's baggage? Also, Collin's reaction really feels underwhelming. I believe he wants more time with Nicole and her having a girlfriend will just take up more of her time. Considering last chapter they were worrying about how to split up Nicole's time without really favoring one of them. I feel like that relationship is just going to blow up in everyone's faces. I can Cynthia being the reason that Nick's lifestyle gets exposed.

I'm really unsure what happened in Dallas. Nicole might be telling the truth, or Thomas might have just lied to his buddies to make himself be seen in a "cooler" light. Maybe that's why Collin is being so seemingly nice to Nick, because he wants to get Nicole to do stuff with other guys.

You seem to be handling the kids alright, although we won't really know that until they know about Collin's role in their parents relationship. As they get older and the longer Collin is in their lives, they will eventually find out.

I am glad though that Nick doesn't have to wear both the panties and chastity belt at the same time. That seemed like overkill.

I've also been waiting for you to introduce Collin taking Nicole's ass. I really hope you do that in a extremely naughty way. Maybe even video tape it.

Overall another good chapter. Although it seems like every chapter has a conversation about the situation between Nick and Nicole where they just basically recommit to their new relationship every chapter. It almost seems like your trying to justify your direction of the story to some disapproving readers.

Please update again soon!

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by LordSlamdawgg12/26/13

Solid story, albeit no blinding, flashes of carnality ( yet) on direct display !

The tale seems to be taking time out to switch gears & emphasis. It was kind of funny to see both Collen & Nick shunted off together to the side, while Nicole forges ahead breaking new carnal ground. Nick is still a fool for Nicole's stockings but I appreciated the flashes of subversiveness and competition that crop up behind him and Collen.

I see Nick as a very smart individual, whose testosterone runs a quart low. Rather then rage about it, he flows with cuck situations like zen water in Tao Te Ching. It's working for him ...for now.

Nicole talks the talk about being willing to give things up. Personally I think the mare has left the barn & is only coming back to munch on oats, cuddle with filly daughters & then dash out to kick up her heels again. . It would have been fascinating to view her reaction if Nick had asked for a time out.

Anyway, I do appreciate the complexity that JayCuck is taking time to weave in saga. Is John's scuttlebutt about Nicole skanking it up authentic ? Sheila and bartenderess are still making goo goo eyes at Nick. He's not reciprocating but it's flattering to have options. If Nicole is lying, then maybe ?
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Personally as a fan of chaos ( in fiction ) I'd enjoy Nick's consternation if Nicole's new gf has a bit of Glenn Close circa ' Fatal Attraction ' . Just saying. This was a little slow and low. I'm guessing this was simmer segment. Hopefully things rev up to boil one way or another next time out.

Will Nick rate a front row seat to action again, at some point please ? Nicole recounting her actions 2nd hand, listening round corners, text pic glimpses is wearing thin. Due to his lack of endowment & deficeit of raw charisma & desire, it's understood he's not meant to be a player. It's a bit too much like getting obstructed view tix at Superbowl..

***** still for tempo change and subplots amping up. The delectable appetizers have been served & appreciated, hopefully heated carnal entrée is en route.

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by Anonymous12/27/13

Bratty Behavior of a Chastized and Pantied Cuckold

I love your story! I'm not as far along in life as Nick but I dream of becoming successful and meeting my soul mate and falling in love and getting married and one day finding our own Collin to take charge. But shouldn't the sissy be punished for his behavior at the party? He was disobedient and bratty and challenged Collin's masculinity. Did he forget he is the one in panties? That he is the one in chastity? That his wife is on the arm of another man? I am hoping that little display didn't go unnoticed. I wait anxiously to see how Collin will remind Nick of his place in the relationship and clarify the expectations for proper party manners. I wish I could write like you! I wish I could live in the world you write about!! Please keep it up!!!! And Merry Christmas and Happy New Year. xoxo, sissy

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by m48gunner12/27/13

Better

I gave up on the series because of the way Collin and Nicole treated Nick, and it seemed as if Nicole had really placed Collin first in her life, above Nick and even the girls, but FINALLY in this chapter we seem to see Nicole actually in LOVE with Nick...still some really strange stuff...like asking the boyfriend if you could make love to your wife....hate that by the way, but overall this is the best chapter yet....you almost convince me that Collin is a pretty good guy and that Nicole actually really loves Nick.....I did say "almost convinced me"!

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by Anonymous12/27/13

Pleasant Surprise...

...to get this chapter sooner than indicated. Great holiday reading. Am a little surprised by Cynthia's appearance. Hope Colin and Nicole's relationship remains primary focus. Would love to see more cuckold/bull interactions preferably in the presence of Nicole. Thought the panties and belt were a nice touch in the previous chapter. Colin seems to be easing off again. They should be consistent in getting deeper into the cuckold lifestyle. I agree with another reader that every chapter has Nicole reaffirming her commitment which sounds like you are pandering to readers who have doubts about Nick's future. Go ahead with an intense cuckold saga without worrying about readers. Your passion for this theme will keep the story shining.

Ignore the trolls, they will have the tissues ready as they start each new chapter. Also, for the fans who can't wait, pls do indicate when u will post Chapter 3.

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by vazkor1312/27/13

Funny how we all see those stories with differrent Point of vue. Some people want more bull/cuckolding, more sissification, other like me do not like that stuff. Not that having those fetish is wrong, in IMHO whatever happens between consenting adult is fine for me.
I usually do not read those stories as it is really far from what I like, I prefer stories from romantic or loving wives category, even without sex ; feeling is what matter to me, my favourite stories being with reconciliation (love conquer all) or just clean breakwhen things goes too far, some cuckold (really few) are interesting (stories from xleglover or goodhusband)
What I love here is that Nick is not your wannabee cuckold/sissy (once again nothing wrong here) he is doing something out of love. But I fear that is devotion and the huge sacrifice is not paid back.
Righ now I am alone, my wife is in her family with the kids, for 2 weeks, and I was thinking about the loneliness of nick while Nicole is having fun. Why accept that ? what is Nick interest ? Hhe is frustrated, and get to have (sometime) a bit of sex with his own wife, he can masturbate with some fleshlight…If he has just the beginning of a relationship wih Sheila Nicole gets (jealous ( !!)
He even has to ask for making love to his wife… (Something I do not understand, That’s Collin who should beg him for the right to just touch Nicole.
And now there is someone else getting sometime with Nicole….
They are working, they have kids, when can they cuddle, have just some fun, some intimacy, I’m not talking about sex, just basic realationship.

I always though that adding someone else in a relationship really dangerous, exciting, new, but incredibly dangerous like driving at 250 Km instead of 90, it may goes smooth for a time, but when an accident happens… And right now Nicole is still speeding up ! Beside It’s already so hard to have a good relationship just with 2 people. How adding someone new can help ?

In fact they never answered those questions ‘where is the limit ?’
How many time alone Nick must be ? If he need the sex or worse all the the intimacy Nicole gives to Collin and now Cynthia, how long before he goes out in search of tenderness and caring ? If Nicole is bored with Nick sexually or he is not enough, why could not he tried with someone else, like the sexy young bartender, maybe some younger flesh, someone new would be good for him.
How Nicole having sex with a bigger dick will help their sex life.
Nicole talk about love, but what is she doing for Nick ? where is the sacrifice ? How long before he wants something in return ? Before the whole situation with the whole imbalance start to became too much ? Nothing too unstable can last before falling down.
Anyway it is a great stories, really well written, whatever direction you’ll write will be good for me ! !

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by solaris6912/27/13

Comments for chapter 2

One thing I like about your writing is that you know how to use dialogues and you are very good at expressing the emotions and the interactions among the characters you displayed. I have read many stories in literotica, sometimes I felt very boring and could not carry on to the end of story because these stories just consisted of paragraph style writing. But, each chapter of your story never ceases amazing for me.

I love the way you unfold the truth about the panty wearing, but I’m still not convinced with the idea. However, I agree with Nick that if somebody really loves his wife, he just does whatever things that may excite or arouse her.

Overall, this is really good chapter and I have only two comments.

First, I feel that Cynthia is too fast development and the way you introduced her to Nicole was so strange. In my opinion, she should be Collin’s ex-girlfriend or cheerleader he fucked in high school. Then, it will be solution to Nicole’s sudden interest in lesbian things. Now, I am really confused that for a woman like Nicole, who has been sexually satisfied (more than satisfied) by Collin on weekly basis, how come she still has interest in homosexual thing??? (I feel it cannot happen in real life)

Second, I expected more action from Collin’s house warming party, but sadly there’s nothing interesting except Cosmo and lesbian things, which Nick can’t even see with his own eyes. And, I don’t understand why you need to express again and again that Nick was very good with mingling with pretty girls like Cassidy although he didn’t get any single action. I have read through this series since “the road” and up to this chapter, Nick didn’t even flirt with any girl/ woman introduced. Are you thinking of Nick to become gay in future chapters? For a normal guy whose wife has been fooling around with lover, Nick was so contended living with cock cage (So strange).

In any way, I really love this chapter and very interested to hear Collin’s talking about anal sex with Nicole. Hopefully, Nick will personally prepare Nicole for this ritual and witness first-hand experience during their intercourse. Then, you can place that chapter under fetish section. Now, I feel this chapter two should be under loving wives section since Nicole talked about a lot of love things.

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by peakmb12/27/13

Makings of a Classic

Jaycuck,
There are some stories that transcend the categories they are in and just become great stories. This is turning into one of them. You are still skilfully walking it along the tightrope of believable reality but, given the personalities involved, and that they are still learning as they go along, they remain inside the reality ring. The fact that they are just inside it only makes the tension high and the story better as a result. I suspect you have many hurdles to go, for all of them, but the wait so far is more than worthwhile.

The high profile that your story is generating is a measure of its quality and its leading edge. You are showing the pool that is the cuckold world to readers who up to now have stood on the edge and looked in. It is a world that can look perverse and illogical as well as cruel and unfeeling to those that don’t (or don’t want to try to) understand the dynamics of the pool. Many comments have started from this edge of the pool viewpoint but lately some have stepped into the shallows a little and seen the shore from the other side. Neither we nor Nick are ready for the deep water in the middle. Most would never want or need to go there, nor understand it if they did. That’s fine, you’re staying closer to the shore at the moment, occasionally getting a bit deeper but also stepping back a little like you have with this chapter when needed. Even a roller coaster has moments of respite after all.

I think you should see the vitriol poured in by some as a compliment in a way. You are explaining a new world with a clarity lacking by many and as such it is all too clear where the attractions of this world can be. There seem to be many, perhaps with a disturbed or repressed childhood that are probably attracted to this but hate themselves for it. The mirror you provide does not enable escape and the result is a knee jerk reaction to attack. Unattractive but understandable in its way. As are they. They are of no matter though.

I think I can see why you got this chapter out so quickly. You have set up a number of potential hurdles to come, some of which have already been pointed out by previous readers. I think the realisation that Collin does not need the physical elements of denial to dominate intelligently is a smart move. They are still available to him and maybe he will use them again but insisting on them gives him no realistic long term space to move to when greater dominance is necessary. It is interesting that no one has really seen Cynthia in the same light as Collin as a threat to Nick’s marriage. Perhaps as guys we just see it as normal to understand the attraction of another hot female and ignore the often greater emotional bond that such relationships can have. Left to mature, probably a greater emotion bond for Nicole than she is developing with Collin. The time she is using up is less of an issue with me. Most women spend time with their girl friends. Ok, perhaps shopping or going to the gym or for coffee or attending their childrens sports events but considerable time nonetheless. Nicole will use some of this time in more carnal pursuits with Cynthia, but her commute to do so precludes a deeper involvement at present. This could change of course. Anyway, having squared away most of the bonding issues between Nicole and Nick and her children, the stage is set for where we go next. I can’t see any of them walking out of the cucky pool just yet. A bit more depth will actually add perspective. It would be natural for instance to find aspects of the cuckold world that were NOT mutually attractive. To be sure, it may take something to compromise out of, but all waters must be charted if they are to be enjoyed fully. Knowing where NOT to go is more important (and has less potential for real damage) than knowing where TO go. Like all of them at the moment, I am really enjoying the journey. Steady as she goes Jaycuck, and thanks.

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by Anonymous12/27/13

More Sex

Please return to the graphic descriptions of sex. "Your wife will call you back" is evocative but not nearly as hot as a more vivid description.

I'm surprised that Nicole's first lesbian encounter is orchestrated by her and not Collin. In fact, Collin never agreed to share her attention with a woman at all. Given his controlling nature, I think Nicole owes him. I'd like to see her work off that debt by him taking her to a club, possibly with Nick, and making her pick up and seduce a girl that they later share. Or maybe the pickup just pleasures Nicole while Collin fucks her. Either way is hot.

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by vazkor1312/28/13

As I wrote I love that story, in a way because it seems to be possible, it is realistic. Today I read it again, from the first chapter to the last and see it in a differrent way.

At the beginning of the story there is a man and his wife, they are in love and they have kids. Hubby accepts that his wife take a boyfriend because he is not enough for her, it’s hard, there is jealousy, pain, but they manage (more or less. Then after some time things goes further :

The ‘control’ thing and Nick/Collin relation
A- Nick has to be controlled with chastity belt and/or wear panties
B- Nick must ask collins to have sex with his wife

Why should Nick give control of his own sexuality to Collin ? If Nicole wants to have a relation with him ok, but why should he be controlled as well ? And most of all : how does it help Nicole and Nick relationship ?
C - Nick is not an eunuch, he is still a man he desire his wife, why should he accept to be frustrated.
In a way way Collin should be gratefull that Nick let him borrow his wife ! Let’s face it, a nice guy allow you to have sex with his hot wife, you should thank him (and collin does it often) so the control stuff bother me and I do not think that Nick as I see it (a strong willing to go far to save his wedding) would accept it for a long time.


Relationship between Nick and Nicole :
As she says :
"Well, I worry you'll think I'm a slut, a woman who will do anything for a big cock, a woman who doesn't respect her husband and isn't worthy of respect herself." » Well in a way it is true, after all she is taking huge risk for sex, but the real questions is :
C- What does Nicole for Nick, to help their marriage ?
She has everything so good for her but does not accept the reciprocity.
We have a saying in France that can be rougly translated as ‘Love does not exist in words only in acts’
Nick as shown is devotion , but Nicole ?
D- Time spent by Nicole outside the family.
Peakmb, in his comments wrote : ‘The time she is using up is less of an issue with me. Most women spend time with their girl friends. Ok, perhaps shopping or going to the gym or for coffee or attending their childrens sports events but considerable time nonetheless’ I completly agree but contary to Peakmb, I see it as a huge issue : if she spend time with Collin, with Cynthia, will she does other stuff ? who will suffer, NicK ? her Kifd ? friends, family ?
Let’s face it, we are human being and days last only 24 hours !
E- Nicole is selfish
She would not accept for Nick to have sex with an other woman, but will not give him sex freely as she has given that right to Collin. But at the same time she tease him and only give Nick some mercy fuck. Great fuck though, but would Nick prefer some more comfortable situaution. And should not be entitled to something new too, some new girl ?
E2- a frustrated Nick could estimate he hasthe right to have sex with someonelse, for the same reason that pushed Nicole outside traditionnal wedding lock : not enough sex and just someone differrent.
F - A new lover (Cynthia) will take more of her Nicole, and, mechanically will further push N from Nick.
G – Security.
Marriage is also security, a safe haven in our life. How long before Nick tires of all the pressure of that new life ?
H - Social stigma.
When Nicole is known by more and more people as Collin Girlfriend, when (not if) it is know Impact on Nick will be huge. And also for the girls, I cannot imagine what they would hear by their ‘friends’ at school.
H2 – It is really hypocritical, when Nicole use harassment excuse versus Sheila and the risk on Nick’s career, she does take risk on Nick’s image by being Collin’s girlfriend.

I really love that story it progres in a fanstastic way, not too slow, nor too fast, but how long before their marriage fail under all the stress : point A, B, C, D, E, E2, F, G, G2, H, H2
For now everything, all the efforts made are made by Nick, and what are his rewards? In a way I have the strange feeling that the marriage is already ‘dead’, because if previously Nicole was frustrated, now I do not see how Nick is going to be happy in that situation, at least not in a real world.

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by Anonymous12/29/13

slowing down - too much of nothing

You need to trim it and remove the dead parts that take it nowhere
i found myself skipping parts this chapter
you repeat the same scene over and over with little or zero change

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by dagoatmandavid12/29/13

end of nick and slut !!

OK I liked this story but now you messed up . Nicole has endangered the lives and safety of there kids . She told there secret about there life to the person she new nothing about .This woman now has the money and power to destroy this family with blackmail .N ick has no choice but remove himself and the girls from Nicole with a restraining order till Nicole get a clean bill of health from the dr.Then a restricted visitation the Kids are the only concern now Nick now knows Nicole has no love for him she lied about Thomas even Collin told nick you need to ask Nicole what she had to do to Thomas to get him to sign the contract he now has proof she nothing but a whore for Collin and has not only no love for her hubby(and yes I've ask several lady's about this they all agree she see him as a worthless person and wants to completely destroy this family before she walks out.) Also I was told by the lady's at the table that if she cant come on a 6 inch dick its because she doesn't love him any more they have no problem coming on there hubbys dicks and none are hung more then 7 inches And here something else I was told sex with strangers does not compare to sex with the person you love there ages 45 to 60 so I will go with there thoughts party over don't go pass go Niccole over

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by NewYorkerotic12/29/13

Will wonders never cease!

Do you mean to tell me that, despite his routine penile confinement, Nick is re-growing his balls and that the cocky Collin may be starting to lose his? What an unexpected turn. Nicole, on the other hand, seems as self-centered as ever.

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by Anonymous12/30/13

Hi Jay

Thank you for second chapter, again very well written. What I miss here is the Nick`s emotion by his first week in chastity belt in the work and at home. Also Nicole must be very horny all week going without sex with Colin or orgasm given by Nick. Nick did get only one orgasm from the intercourse with Nicole in last two weeks and they are now all workdays together for lunches and nights until party on Friday. By all the teasing from Nicole I wonder why Nick not asked for release from CB or for permission to have sex with his wife. I think there must be turmoil in Nick`s head from his first experience with CB, morning woods, all the women at work, teasing from Nicol…

I am looking for next chapter!

Sebastian

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by Anonymous01/01/14

Not to be impatient....

...but when will the next chapter be posted? Is it work in progress?

Also, there is a lot of intellectual analysis by readers about the state of Nick's marriage. The cuckolding and denial by a loving wife is so much more erotic than that by a dominatrix. Its a sweet pain that is an acquired taste. I say, let the games continue.

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by Anonymous01/03/14

Getting back on track

Love how the story is progressing. Nick very clearly understands that he is losing Nichole to Collin and he agrees that Collin is the Alpha male in this relationship. Early in the chapter, Nick was very clear that he wanted Nichole to stop seeing Collin. Nichole very skillfully ignored Nick and played up to Nick to get him to change his mind cementing his future as a servant for use by Collin and herself. It was also nice that when Nick expressed concerns about Nichole having Collins baby, she did not comment one way or the other.

Collin is clearly exerting greater control over Nichole, as it seems very likely that he sent Nichole to offer sex to Thomas in exchange for closing the deal for Collin. John seemed to indicate that Collin has used sex in the past to close deals. Also interesting that Nichole has no issue now in lying to Nick when she told him nothing happened with Thomas. She clearly belongs to Collin

I am sure Collin will demand greater obedience from both Nichole and Nick. Nichole needs to be punished for hooking up with Cynthia as well as having sex with Nick without his permission. I suspect that Collin will move even further to Dick vs Dom for Nick. perhaps cutting him off from any physical contact or insisting that he tell his daughters about their relationship so he no longer has to hide his relationship with Nichole. Nichole as punishment will likely need to offer her ass to Collin.

Collin needs to mark Nichole as his property by making her get a piercing to tattoo that shows her obedience Collin slipping even further away from Nick and her old life as she becomes more of Collins private slut.

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by Anonymous01/03/14

Just want to know when we can expect to read next chapter. I sincerely hope that your work is in progress.
Thanks

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by Anthony6018501/06/14

A change of direction

Just when it seemed that Nick and Nicole would become complete submissives to Collin, Cynthia enters the picture and changes the dynamic of the group. It would appear even Collin will get bumped from the rotation and Cynthia becomes the driving force. As always the details of the story make it seem like the cast are all friends of the reader and we just have to laugh and shake our heads at the lifestyle they have chosen. Well written like the other stories and very entertaining though putting it in the fetish category has probably reduced readership a bit. I look forward to the next installment.

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by nuvi4501/06/14

Home Run – A Big Five Stars

In chapter 2, I finally feel that Nick and Nicole are truly sole-mates off on a very wild erotic adventure, often having to reconnect and reassure each other of their love as well as their passion (mostly Nicole’s) for sexual exploration. At times Nicole seems to be the wild mare with Nick trying to pull back on the reins. I love the way that Nicole, Nick, Collin and now Cynthia can easily slide in and out of character as they interact with different people, especially the children. Also I feel that Collin and Nick are truly becoming friends, being able to slip into their Dom/Sub roles at the right time. And Nick has become a Cuckold with a hilarious ‘attitude problem’ which exhibits both strength and wit. Nicks evolving relationship with Sheila is just electric. Sheila flirting and sexual innuendos intersperse with shared passion for cars and guns was a touch of magic in this story, especially when it triggered Nicole’s rant of possessive jealously.

The big wild card is now Cynthia. In the last chapter Nick naively dismisses Nicole and Cynthia’s relationship as kind of harmless girl-girl stuff, the real challenge being the relationship between Collin and Nicole. Many times, dominate women can be much more assertive than men, especially in a lesbian relationship. Is Cynthia a benevolent Svengali, spinning a web of lust and eroticism over submissive Nicole and Nick? The stage is set for a really wild ride on this superbly written tale. Great Job!

Nuvi45

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by Anonymous01/06/14

Help with the timing

Following your story but do not have a good handle on the time frame of the events.  Seems to me that the relationship should be about 18 months old? This accounts for the large proposal that Nick won 4~6 months?
Buying Collins house 3 months?
A number of weekend golf games, BBQ's, overnighters, etc.
Perhaps you can weave a hint into one of your next chapters?

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by Anonymous01/08/14

Same story two different opinions

It is interesting that two people reading the same story can arrive at completely different positions on the story.  With respect to Nuvi45, I find this story a dark tragedy.

I feel that Nick and Nichole are grasping at straws to hold on to a life now past. Their expression in trying to reassure and reconnect are half efforts without substance snd true conviction. The only thing holding them together are their daughters. Although Nichole seems to have very little interest in their life since Collin came into the picture.  The love between Nick and Nichole is now superficial.  Just in this chapter, Nick asked Nichole to stop seeing Collin.  Nichole was clearly conflicted trying to figure out if she could stop, them changed her approach to get Nick to agree to allow her to continue.

Collin is acting more as a master or a bully, treating Nick as less of a friend  and more like a competitor or a slave- telling him to get him a drink, trying to hurt him while golfing with his comments about Nichole.  Things a friend would net do.  

Nick is becoming more indebted to Nick than ever with contacts he is making thru Collin.  I see little strength in Nicks or Nichols character as they again and again gives in to Collins demands.

I see little of Nichole's voice or her side of the story- to me this is a big gap.  Who is Nichole and what is driving this self destructive behavior?

All the other characters are bit players that will plow Collin to hurt or exert more control.  perhaps with threats of black male- Collin has said he would never hurt Nicks and Nichols family, but he may feel that threatening to expose Nick unless he meets new demands places the responsibility for any hurt on Nick.

The stage is set, I agree , for a very tragic ending.

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by Anonymous01/09/14

Hi Jay,

We are quite hooked on to this story. When do you think the next chapter will be out? Thanks for writing. Its a pleasure reading it. The beauty of this story is that even when there's no physical 'action', it is still emotionally sexual. Truly the mind is the biggest sex organ.

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by peakmb01/09/14

Strangely Silent

Jaycuck, you have now received a fair number of responses to your request for feedback but you seem strangely silent in either acknowledgement or reply. Whilst I hope this is just because you are so busy writing the next parts, I do hope there is nothing more serious?

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by JayCuck01/09/14

Update

Just a quick update.

Everything's fine, I'm just working on a few new projects and they're taking a lot of my time. I am working on Ch03, but I'm finding it hard to write for some reason. Anyway, I don't anticipate getting it finished before February.

I hope everyone had a great holiday season.

JC

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by Anonymous01/09/14

Collin needs to get control back

Reading a number of other comments and I agree with a number of posters that Nichole needs to tattooed and pierced at Collins insistence. 

Collin also needs to take Nichols ass and make Nick clean him up when done. 

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by Anonymous01/10/14

YET MORE AWESOME STUFF...I LOVE IT!!!

I just want to say to a few of the comments I have read that seem to think the plot is not as deep as it was earlier...and especially to someone who said it was building to a tragic end soon.... ARE YOU OUT OF YOUR MINDS!!!!! This is probably the most gripping storyline on-line about a cuckolding lifestyle. Jay took the story on a slightly different angle in these last two chapters to offer a broader base for him to work on for us all. Jay also pointed out in his little preamble that some may not like the direction he was taking it. Well I for one LOVE the way things are going and there seriously is now so much that can be used to embellish the story.
Yes Collin has been thrown a curve ball with Cynthia's arrival in Nicole's life, but the opportunities that opens up are incredible. Will all 3 work on ensuring the cuckold is cuckolded from different angles now. Cynthia has already been upfront about her being jealous or possessive of her female lovers, I cant wait to see how that translates into the life of Nicole, whose emotional involvement with her first female lover will have a very different and deeper emotional dynamic than the sexually reliant addiction she has to Collins Black Cock and his 'dominant' control of her sexually. Or how Nicole is going to learn how to play her husbands mind from two different angles as both male & female Lovers impact on his cuckolded life through her. Then what about the possibility that perhaps Cynthia's ex hubby, who we know was in a sports team, and therefore possibly Black, meaning that she is no stranger to Black Cock, yes she may prefer women now, but when she see's the pleasure Collin gives Nicole with his Huge Black Cock, she may also fall under his control. then you have young Jasmine who could develop a crush on her mums knew best girlfriend and where will that lead, how will Nick & Nicole help their daughter develop sexually. What about the desire for a 3rd baby, will Nick find out his vasectomy cannot be reversed, he will truly feel a lesser man then, Will Collin breed Nicole, or will they agree to her being bred anonymously by being blindfold and fucked by an entire sports team of Black Men. The possibilities are endless...and the angst, the internal emotions of Nick, his sexual frustration or release...oooh...I love the way his mind is worked over. I think he is right to remain devoted to his beautiful wife, I think her deep love for him and their family IS a bond that cannot be broken, but he does have to learn to live with and accept their lifestyle choice, as once Pandora's box has been opened it will never close again. I think, when and IF this story has to close, it should be by Nick being head hunted for his successes and the family having to move to a new state and start afresh perhaps with Nicole discovering she is pregnant from a Black Cock Breeding Party that was set up by Collin as a leaving gift to both of them, where Nick is enticed, persuaded or forced to to ask each of say 10 Masked Ball, Black Men to fuck his wife begging them to use her like the Black Cock Slut she has become and to cum deep inside her in the hope of breeding her. Collin, his attorney, and many of his Black Star clients that she has fantasised about all get to use her for one night whilst she remains blindfolded so her babies father will be unknown...It could be Collins, or it could be his attorneys or any one of the Black Men. Nick & Nicole can then move on and begin a new life with their new Black baby...I can imagine them driving away from their old home, the girls in the back of the SUV, and Nicole with her belly growing sat up front with Nick whose hand is gently placed on her baby belly as they lovingly smile to each other and drive off into the sunset...or something like that....Point is I NEVER WANT THIS STORY TO END...IT IS FANTASTIC!!!!

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by Anonymous01/10/14

To the last anonymous, so what you are saying is it's all about the Big Black Cock? I think that is what you were hinting at. I would love to see the BBC bull cucked by the crazy ass jealous lesbian. There's a new direction for you. Do cock cages come that big? No problem, he's a cuck now, just cram that boy clitty in there, don't worry if it pinches when it locks.

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by Mrfixitforyou01/12/14

We need another twist,layer,turn ,conundrum, helix, aspect.

Colin is spinning Im sure. I remember him telling Nick that he needed Nick to agree to him having more control of their marriage. Actually Colin cant be what he wants to be because as a dom he is not a dick.
As a businessman Nick is approaching the top of his game. With the right mentors and contacts he will be in the stratosphere because he is such a quick learner. That is what makes him an unstable cuckhold. He does not understand the landscape. He does not have a grip on the fact that he can be an Ace in one arena and dud in another.
Case in point Nick is the Man in negotiations. Just good enough on the golf course to continually beat Colin. Witty enough to put Colin on his heels with quick remarks. Savvy enough to keep John " in the dark" Cool enough to keep his "Office Romance" categorized as Mentor / Mentee.
As a husband,potential lover and I dare say Dad his emotions are compromised by females. He wont accept an obvious invitation from women who think he is "worth it"
Now there is the rub. Nick does not know what the hell to do when female pheromones are around in the right concentration to throw his system off.
Here are the facts: Pheromones from females attract males. Pheromones act like radio signals and there is a sender and receiver. At certain levels the psycho /sexual chemistry becomes unraveled and a Cuckhold is born.
At lower levels it makes manipulation easier. When this phenomenon occurs within familiars, friendship , family the implications can be encouragement to push Males to higher aspirations or sinister. In Nicks case , Nicole's Pheromones clearly put Nick's ability to think rationally in question.
Swinging is one thing, Cucking is one thing , Allowng a man to sleep in your house , with your wife in the marital bed while the children are home is clearly validation of my hypothesis.
Having said that: What Nick needs the bartender or his mentee to have a higher level of female pheromone directed for his advancement I have written Nicole off as a souless bitch who twist the love of a good man into the ugliest spectacle of jealousy. She s jealous of Nick professionally. She wants to ruin him.

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by blackcrystal8301/19/14

interesting twists

This story is taking some very interesting twists. I like the fact that Nicole has found a new lesbian girlfriend, but I'm disappointed that Cynthia hasn't shown any interest in having sex with Collin. I hope that will change. I'm a little worried also that Cynthia doesn't seem to be respecting Collin's dominant position in Nicole's life. However, I am really excited about what happens next!

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by Anonymous01/22/14

I think I am Jay Cuck Addict!

I have been looking every day for the next chapter. I know Jay said not till February, but I am like a heroin addict waiting for the next score. I am going through some bad withdrawal! Lol

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by Anonymous01/23/14

Re: Addiction

Same here. Jay, a lot of us are getting withdrawal symptoms. what are the chances of getting the next chapter this month? Also, is the south padre series being continued?

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by JayCuck01/23/14

JayCuck Update

Hi Folks.
Thanks once again for reading my stories. I sincerely appreciate it. Chapter 03 is coming along and I'm currently on page 15. The last few chapters have been about 50 pages (word) and I think I'm going to trim that down a little and post more often. I am going to try and finish Ch03 before February.

I am also working on an update to Friends with Benefits. That story has been a lot of 'hearts and flowers' and I'm going to take it in a new direction. I'd like to create some serious tension in the story.

The book I'm working on is getting out of control. I planned on it being under 100k words, but it's well over that and growing quickly. I'm enjoying it, but what started as a cuckold book, is turning into a romantic thriller...ugh. I don't anticipate having it completed until April.

Thanks again.

JC

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by Anonymous01/23/14

Nice to hear about ur updates. Don't worry, we are still supporting you and I will be counting the days to read chapter 3
Thanks

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by Anonymous01/25/14

get ready for some action.

Congratulations jaycuck. Brilliant work so far. I am actually anxious about what comes next.
My prediction is some serious tension and fireworks.
No idea which way this will all go but I don't think it'll be all nicey nicey in the next chapter.

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by Anonymous01/25/14

Disturbing

The suggestion of two outside perverts having an influence on how the couple's children are brought up is worrying and the author needs to tread carefully. Manipulation of children in whatever form is not acceptable. As for the rest of the story, it seems the author has thrown in almost every sexual antic he can think off, which is so far off reality as to ruin it for me. His previous works have a sort of intellectual basis to them, whereas this one has turned into another sissy cuckold tale. Some people will like it no doubt but it is not for me.

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by Anonymous01/25/14

many flaws

Many flaws emerging in this twisted relationship. I thought she just wanted to play around a bit, not abandon her daughters and let some two bit player take too much control in their lives. The husband agreed to an open relationship, why are we at mean spirited cucking with a rediculous cock cage etc. He'd be a happier man if she'd actually be at hoome once in a while and fuck her husband. He is too successful a business man to fall into this sissy shit. And now as other commenters have pointed out the wife is screwing her husband without colins knowledge, where are you going, either she's a narcacistic slut who believes she loves he husband or is she going to become a reasonable swinger? To the best of my knowledge successfull swingers don't do this to one partner and they don't let outsiders decide anything. Maybe the test is that you show this to your wife, dress her up sexy and set her loose in Vegas. Does she know about your desires dear author?

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by Anonymous01/26/14

Thanks for the update

Guys,
Mike likes the 'mean spirited cucking' and thats why he is in it. Why else would he have continued with it thus far?

Its like people who like S&M - its their thing. I hope Collin and Nicole's relationship (in full view of Mike) remains the key focus here. Looking forward to the next one.

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by Anonymous01/28/14

Love It

Since Nicole gave away Colin's pussy (to a girl), I think Colin should take her to a club and make her seduce some young thing either for his viewing pleasure of for a threesome.

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by Anonymous01/30/14

uggghhhh

you have claimed again and again that this story is based on real situations but if you make everyone just accept it when the truth comes out (and it will come out) with no personal or professional repercussions for those involved then i will have to quit reading your stories as they arent realistic anymore

and getting the children involved would have child protective services down on you so fast it would make your head spin as they whisked your children out of that hostile environment (and it would be classified as a hostile environment make no mistake) and placed in foster care with a real family who isnt into sexual deviancy

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by Anonymous01/31/14

Stop commenting like this is a real event.

Sometimes I just don't get reader comments. This is a sex story. A happy ending does not need to be a happy feel good situation. There are thousands of incest stories on this site that have the whole family going at it. And yet, some of us protest at the thought that Jasmine needs to be told about the arrangement. Please read the story for what it is. This is fiction and not a newspaper report. Else, please protest against every story in the Incest, BDSM, Fetish, LW sections.

That said I really hope the new chapter has been uploaded now.

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by Anonymous02/02/14

HONESTY

She is only honest when she has to appease nick. More to Nicole than nick suspects, John has a better sense of reality about Nicole. Nick has two women interested in him who seem to have more in common with Nick, now a third. Cynthia may be more interested in sharing nick than Nicole realizes. The great sex Nicole says nick gets is only in her mind, Cynthia has a better realization of their relationship. Nicole is justified in being afraid Nick will see her as she is. Nicole can;t cum with Nick because she has to have some taboo act to turn her on. It must be terrible to fuck a woman who doses not cum, that is part of the enjoyment otherwise just jerk off.

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