All Comments on 'Scandalous mom'

Excellent! Great rhythm!

would have been better with a variant rhyme son/fun eh? son-ho/ sick-ko/ nympho

first line begs a comma, or better wording, bwtf the resident genius approves -

lord almighty don't leave a name

5ed against my better judgement

fun-o, not son-ho, sorry for the mistake, it's hard to think straight after seeing an anon comment, he is just that funny.

I think you have a good concept and start, but it's obviously unfinished and in need of some editing to make better sense of things and to allow a better incorporation of the rhymes and near-rhymes being used.

Give us some more of this story please. What's the age of the son?

@pelegrino: The son just turned eighteen.

@twelveoone: I agree that this poem is far from perfect. I'll think about the rhyme suggestion. The first line will have to do without the comma, in order to reflect the dazed, substance-addled state of mind that produced the poem.

the joys of sweet motherfucking. This young author is a treasure to all of us who love to read about lusty boys and their compliant moms. I bet this gifted writer was hard as a rock when he writes his stories and poetry and ends up by blowing his young balls and shooting his big loads of semen all over the place. I only hope that his own mother appreciates her brilliant boy and spreads her thighs for his fat young cock.