All Comments on 'Seeds of a Medical Fantasy'

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hottpicshottpicsover 10 years ago
check your spelling

do something more than spell check...loose weight is not the same as lose weight for example.. spell check says it's OK but it's not

PrfsrPrfsrover 10 years ago
Whole - hole

Whole body, not hole body; clothes, not cloths

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Sweet.....

An AWESOME start, and a wonderfully intriguing fantasy of more men than will ever admit....myself included.

Keep writing...:)

gspanker051gspanker051over 5 years ago
Intresting Story

Well written good story

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