I Remember Mother

I N C O M P L E T E . . .

Your ending discourse didn't make the story complete - regardless of how you think it was humorous - sorry but you get only 25%.

GREAT STORY THAT NEEDS FINISHING!

WOULD HAVE BEEN 100! IT WAS A GREAT STORY THAT LEFT ME HANGING! PLEASE FINISH IT!

nobody buys half a book, finish the story

fuck you, asshole.

Hey a half circle isnt nice

Good story and good writing but needs completing man. Def more points if the story was complete

Part One Is Best

Part One of this story is better than part 2. I love the description of his mom's body--breasts and pussy. A mother should have a thick dark full bush as this one does. One can imagine the intense tingling sensation as his tip touches her soaking wet labia.

You Dick Head
You fucked a good story by not fifishingit

A little different

A fairly basic premise,but with a slightly different rhythm.

im ready to explode

Man wish my dildo was bigger and this story was longer how hot i would love to b a fly on that wall.. mmmm

Did you ever get it in? I would have put it in do hard!!!