All Comments on 'Fleeting Moments'

by MzFly

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todski28todski28over 10 years ago
good to see you back

rhythm, pacing and rhyme are really well done, a lot of really good lines in this that portray the thoughts of those moments,

the first stanza is rocking and sets the tone and pace

thoroughly enjoyed this

greenmountaineergreenmountaineerover 10 years ago

It felt like dance. Nicely done.

DocSavage656DocSavage656over 10 years ago
A Wonderful Song of the Heart

Beautiful words that "Answer some questions we were never meant to ask"

Thanks for setting a lovely tune in my heart for the rest of my day.

Doc

adidasgaladidasgalabout 10 years ago
BEYOND BEAUTIFUL

What an TALENTED poet. I do not usually read poetry, unless i need to express myself when i am unable to do so verbally, but this poem, simply takes my breath away. Awesome!

** I LOVE IT **

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
A beautiful poem, from a talented poet.

"Fleeting Moments" - I really love this one!

Thank You!

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