by renaissanceman50
... seems to me that someone so critical should at least write comments using proper grammar.
Ya know, not every story is for you to enjoy.
Read them and, if you do not enjoy, move on.
If you want to leave any type of constructive critique than do so.
Otherwise, you're the asshole.
Definitely 2-or-3 problems (literally just that many), & readers deserve an ending. So much great detail, but you left it wide-open? Disappointing.