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Ashesh9Ashesh9over 10 years ago
For the curve of her breast

Just beyond my breath !

Breathtakin'ly excellent:5-ed .

todski28todski28over 10 years ago
nice imagery

succinct and the sound component in the final lines is sublime

buttersbuttersover 10 years ago

once again, very nice.

Maria2394Maria2394over 10 years ago
ooohhh

what a surprising little poem! good work!

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