by T_Silverwolf
That's some awesome writing. Hope to see more. I especially like the main character.
Sincerely,
Thank you. I'm still not quite as confident (or, some might say competent) as I think I can be, but I'm working on improving. I hope you continue to enjoy what gets written and welcome your feedback-- good, bad or otherwise. :)
Just fyi... this story fails to open fully on the mobile application, where I do all my reading. It opens but does not display anything after the phrase, "Volume 2. Don't you worry".
I'm so sorry you're having a problem. I don't understand why that's happening, but as soon as I get home tonight I'll see if I can't do something to fix it, even if it's posting up the raw ASCII files. Sorry about that. :|