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by theoncomingstorm

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TsothaTsothaabout 10 years ago

I like your choice of words and rhymes, but the pace was a bit off for me in a couple stanzas (sentences too short followed by sentences too long).

Also:

"Like King Midis' touch of gold" -> King Midas?

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