by Avery13
At least you are trying to find a way of expressing sexualaty the way it is and not just bang bang which most authors do. Keep up the good work and not so much dreaming.
wow. great job. nicely written and the story itself was really good. by the end it was even getting me hot!!!
i do have to say i read the entire thing.. daum i wish i knew that lil slut. haha!!
goddamn this girl acctually fucked herself in the school bathroom.........thats awsome lol
I'd like to do that to myself in the school bathroom! awesome, this almost sent me to orgasm!!
im a guy. i read it, i became sooooo hard, i wanna fuck that one girl on the article.
Soooo fake, and soooo unrealistic.
oh my god I read this and spewed jizz all over my computer screen. I'm Shivering with pleasure
Of course it may not happen like this but give the guy/girl props they have a very vivid imagination and I must give them props myself.
Damn that shit got me horny i made my gf read this and then we were in the bed having sex
Well I'm a lesbian and that made my pussy soo wet I loved it and I want to fuck a girl now haha,
this made me so wet i had an intense orgasm cuz i fucked myself so hard and squirted and cummer everywhere i couldnt help myself!!
I got so wet when I read this I squirted im a lesbian and my gf was shocked when she saw it but she didnt squirt so atleast one of us did and of course some girls fantasize about a guy like that and they do that but hey thats what girls do so why worry? its only natural!! :)
guys pleasure themselves to hot girls. there's nothing wrong with that right
I have a very sensitive clitoris and orgasm quickly so every time I go to the toilet wherever I am I give it a quick diddle and enjoy an orgasm. I've done this at school, in the supermarket, at friends houses - just about anywhere. My best illicit orgasm though was on a crowded train. I was squashed up against a man and he put his hand near my pussy on the outside of my trousers. He rubbed my camel toe and I orgasmed right there on his hand.
Since this is the author's only post and that was in 2003 I doubt that it will meet the promise of "to be continued." Pity!