All Comments on 'Something Primal Ch. 01'

From your story: "her ass was small, but both cheeks were nice and rounded. They met through mutual friends when they were 19"

Wow - her ass cheeks didn't meet until they were nineteen!? :)

The "Anonymous" post "Estranged ass cheeks" was actually by me

Please consider the use of an editor. Some of your sentences just do not make any sense example: "Because of Nicoles subdued sex drive, Connor had to was left with a constant craving. "

Hope you post another chapter soon

Sorry for the errors lol I had to delete some things to get it posted, so certain sentences don't make any sense, unfortunately. And a few things were from typing too fast. I just got burnt out on having to go through it to get it submitted, I should have looked over it one last time. I'll be sure to get in touch with and editor when I write the other chapters, though. Thanks for laboring through my rookie mistakes, hope you found some enjoyment in the story though.

Great story so far

When is Chapter 2 coming? Been waiting and waiting for this!

Rly good i'm eager to read what's up next

I really enjoyed reading this, but when is chapter 2 coming?! AAAAH tension is killing me.

Been waiting forever to read the next part!

Cannot wait for the next part! Amazing writing!! :)

You have amazing writing! :) I'm soooo excited for the next part!!