All Comments on 'Secret Life of a Guilty Wife Ch. 02'

by theoncomingstorm

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
stop writing

pure garbage

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
How to become the worlds best slut

Divorce and pay your own bills. Then nobody will care.

Let the ex-hubby find a complete woman not just a life support for a cunt.

SparksWillFlySparksWillFlyabout 10 years ago
Sociopath

With a poor sap husband to abuse for amusement.

chytownchytownabout 10 years ago
This Is Worst**

Then the first.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Hot .. Hotter .. Hottest

No not a comment of the story,

just to let Chytown learn the comparative Bad .. Worse .. Worst.

and this one does look like it was trotted out before breakfast, but is by no means the worst.

The Inclusion of Two ( count 'em Two) lines of dialogue only microscopically changes it from a " He did this and then I did that. " tale.

Cheers, and Storm, I am sure you can do better with effort.

Kilroy.

honey_licker1124honey_licker1124about 10 years ago
Enjoyed it.

Forget the critics. This is your style. Make it nasty and raunchy! BUT please proof read, proofread, proofread!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Barely readable

Get an editor

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
honeylicker

are you for real or just a cuckold at heart?

26thNC26thNCabout 5 years ago
No guilt

She embraces being a cheating whore.

Anonymous
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