by theoncomingstorm
Divorce and pay your own bills. Then nobody will care.
Let the ex-hubby find a complete woman not just a life support for a cunt.
No not a comment of the story,
just to let Chytown learn the comparative Bad .. Worse .. Worst.
and this one does look like it was trotted out before breakfast, but is by no means the worst.
The Inclusion of Two ( count 'em Two) lines of dialogue only microscopically changes it from a " He did this and then I did that. " tale.
Cheers, and Storm, I am sure you can do better with effort.
Kilroy.
Forget the critics. This is your style. Make it nasty and raunchy! BUT please proof read, proofread, proofread!