All Comments on 'Getting Mom Ch. 02'

by LowSwingin

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

That was sexy as hell. Can't wait for the next part.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Now let the friends join in

It would be excitîg to see the friends join the son in fuckin the mom.

redlion75redlion75about 10 years ago

why does this have to be turned into a story where the son turns the mom into a whore fore you anonymous?if you are in need of that then try the slut wives section.

oldnornryoldnornryabout 10 years ago
Amazing story!

Fuck first and then the courting. You were right on with the emotion and the frustration between them. He seemed much more mature than a high school kid. I enjoyed it immensely and can't wait for the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Best story

Friends join mom.....

Sex4LfSex4Lfabout 10 years ago

Don't add the friends. Just keep it between John and his mom. Smoking hot!! I love the way that you write. Your writing is so descriptive and interesting. Just a suggestion but get an editor who would pick up on the tiny errors in spelling (brassiere not brazier, wrap not rap, etc). Can't wait for the next chapter!

jimmyj57jimmyj57about 10 years ago
Moms

This is a very good story please finnish it I am sure that it will help you . I have talked with others in same type of relationship with there mom and know how much better they felt after sharing there story .

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
very nice story..

Please continue this story...

do no add other people

good job...

BonoVox99BonoVox99about 10 years ago
Horrible dialogue

Nobody talks like this.

CYANIDE_KIDDCYANIDE_KIDDabout 10 years ago
Knock, KnocK....

I gave this 4 stars.

Get her pregnant & I'll give it a 6 (!).

Please. Great story dude!!

LordSlamdawggLordSlamdawggabout 10 years ago
Overall very fine story with welcome switch in style of seduction/ consummation from first installment !

There is some polish that could be applied to sections of this story. But its clear the author has put effort into this tale and it shows. Yes the dialogue is a bit stilted here and there. Yet I very much enjoyed the alternate romance and carnality that LowSwinging deftly segues in and out of. The buildup of teasing and action ramps up first class. *****

DougntexasDougntexasabout 10 years ago
DougNTexas

Personally I thought this was a great story. Been a while since I read a story on here that was this good. Write more often. I loved it.

Doug

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichabout 10 years ago
A great story

Very descriptive sex scenes and a loving storyline.

Thanks for the read

TrilloTrilloabout 10 years ago
Stylish,thoughtful.

style is great, Excellent story and pace. I so look forward to the next instalment.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
A Great Read

Thank you! I look forward to more chapters. You make the reader feel like they are in the room.

vrieseavrieseaabout 10 years ago
Excellent Writing

You've got me hooked with your descriptive style. Love your patience in developing this story. Look forward to the conclusion.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Don't!

Please don't involve the friends, male or female in their relationship. In fact, this story could have been better if you didn't drag Steve into the picture.

kennyboy82kennyboy82about 10 years ago

This is an awesome story, not one of your usual wham, bam type mother fucking stories, it's a carefully written and crafted story. It proceeds carefully, all the time retaining a strong thread of reality. I'm really liking this!

Glad there's another chapter on its way.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Next

Next one please

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

please write the a new part!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Great Story!

"best part of a meal is the feeling you get immediately before you take the first bite, the sense of anticipation" That is so true. Just like this story- the build up, the emotional struggle and the anticipation. Hope the next chapter will be longer and progress the the relationship beyond their 2nd bout.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
this is a great story and absolutely looking foward to more chapters

So many more things at the cum!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
amazing...eagerly waiting for the next part

This is a very beautiful story....please update the next part as soon as possible.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Nice

Very good writing and fairly realistic story line made the story extremely enjoyable to read.Looking forward to more from you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

The first chapter was very real and to the point .i love how this chapter made me wait and anticipate what was gonna come (which was a very well written blowjob and grinding scenes) i cant wait for chapter 3 .one of the best incest stories i have read on literotica

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Great slow-paced seduction

The great narrative motion is so smoothly done. And I really like the slow buy-in from Claire.

The eroticism is high and the promise of future allowances/romance really put this in my 'favorites' section.

No rush, but more please!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Good Writing

I like the way you write but manipulative little bitches like the boy in this story need to be shot and dealt with. Fucking douche couldn't respect his mom or love her with by his actions. Know how men all cry about manipulative bitches using sex to get their way, the son's the same little piece of crap as those bitches for using the love his mom had for him to seduce her. Personally don't like the plot but your writings good.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

Teasing is good, but if you delay your next posting too much, people would forget the prologue and lose interest in your story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

Please continue this story, I would love to know the ending. Love the writing

dave3944dave3944about 10 years ago
No need for apologies

I have your page up and check all the time, waiting for the last part. LET'S HAVE IT!! Great writing. I really enjoy the build-up. I hate it when the Mom gives in so easily. When she is so hesitant, it makes the act so much sweeter. You've done a great job letting us know she wants it, but still has one reservation. She needs to get so hot she begs for it. Nothing accidental, but intentional, as she runs roughshod over that last hurdle. Great work.

richbwrichbwalmost 10 years ago
very nice

great story line cant wait for the next chapter keep it going great writing i love when its just mom and son love with out having mom fucking everything in sight very refreshing love the writing

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
So far so good

There was a place in this story that i felt John was a real piece of work, that he was acting like a spoiled brat. He seemed to get his act together and began to realize the reality of the situation and his Mother's reasonable reaction to it.

George in Omaha

SouthLondonerSouthLondoneralmost 10 years ago
Intelligently written, nice, loving sexy story. [My FIRST EVER 6 Stars]

Bravo to this really sexy, loving story. Over the 2 or 3 years I've been here I've read hundreds of stories [mostly 'Mum-Son' Incest] and, until now, have NOT previously awarded 6 Stars. To say, I loved this story, would be the proverbial, understatement. A word to you, LowSwingin, like yourself, I always read the comments at the end. I noticed a couple od posts must have got-your-goat somewhat, because you 'broke cover' [so to speak] and lambasted them. However, in hindsight, do you now think those 2 posts warranted your wrath. I personally feel you allowed them to drag you down to their troughs momentarily. Having read some of your work I'm sure you are smarter than that. To conclude, I LOVE your story [up to this point and eagerly await reading chapter 3] and have added you to my 'short-list' of favoured authors. Great work. Keep it up [pardon the pun] Regards from South London

jaccorjaccorover 9 years ago
Please continue.

I have read both installments, and I would enjoy it, if you would continue telling this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
more please

I have really enjoyed parts qne and two - please write the third

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
good love story the incest was ok be waiting for moretenbears43

hope he gets mom totally soon.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Very Erotic

I found your first two parts so exciting that I eagerly hoped for the third, the consummation. That it has been 14 months since your last publication is very disappointing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
WHEN???!!!

I read the first 2 parts to this amazing story and honestly can't wait for the third and final portion. Please don't make me wait for it too long. This story is amazing!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
WOW

couldn't finish this one star story ZERO erotic BECAUSE sonny boy is beyond perverted and a fucking JERK. well boohoo i'm gonna run away unless you fuck me mommy. I guess mommy dearest became the tramp slut the little boy wanted. wow what a man he will be NOT!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Loved it

I disagree with the below comment. I think there is always a little manipulation in courtship, even with the best intentions, and he played it very well. I loved the way he talked to get especially when they we're screwing around. I'm a woman but I wasn't offended. I think it is nice to know there are a small percentage of men out there who know exactly how a woman's mind works. I wish I could find one. I also wanted to say this is the story that I keep coming back to- soooooo hot.

CompletedLeafieCompletedLeafieover 7 years ago
No doubt a nonconsent story.

The kid sounds fucking twisted. He rapes his own mother while she is drunk, and then has no fucking regret at all. From there on he goes on to pressuring his mother into giving in to his fucked up mindset where it is all or nothing without doing anything for it. He basically uses her loneliness and maternal instinct to get what he wants, and he knows it. The story deserves less than a star.

It is kids like these I would have loved to see get dominated and fucked with a strap on without consent, just like he did to his own mother.

MarraTedMarraTedover 7 years ago
Probably one of the best tales on here.

This tale has brought so many memories back about my teenage years with my mom. I was also an only child and it was only in later years realised that I was given the come-on several times. On thinking back I now began to realise that rather than give me her own body she persuaded her much younger single sister to do so which I accepted gleefully.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Sick

I made l it as far as page 3, then I could not stand this aragant, self centered little ass hole any more. Incestuous relationships between consenting adults is fine with me. But this definitely not between consent adults. The only consent here was between him and his dock. Fuck me mommy or I will leave. Sounds more like a spoiled rotten, insecure little kid than supposed 19 year old. I do not now, nor will ever recommend this bullshit story to anyone.

XxxBear

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
DON'T GET UPSET, FOLKS. THE GUY'S A FUCKING LIAR WHO WANTS YOU TO BELIEVE IT'S TRUE THAT HE FUCKED HIS MOTHER.

The more likely truth is that he's pathological liar who fucks chickens with his four inch dick while IMAGINING that he's fucking his mother.

He gave her age as 17 for when he was conceived and said he was19, when he 'fucked his 38 year old mommy', and that doesn't add up. She'd have to be 37 years old and IF he'd actually fucked her, he'd know EXACTLY how old she was at that time for the rest of his life. That alone tips you off that this is a made up story.... but there are other dumb fuck things in his story that don't ring true, too.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
How could you?

Treat Mom like that? Wow!! Truly an exciting story, well written and driven with the right amount of strength to sate those hormone driven urges to keep her in place while thrusting deeply into her face. Voted 5 stars because its so depraved. Moms do love to be handled properly by their son's.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
inconsistancy

I'm enjoying the story but.....please be consistent with the "tight little frame" and big fleshy thighs. "Pelvic bones and "big squishy ass"

Thanks

Foxterot7aFoxterot7aalmost 3 years ago

The author was correct in his statement "If you don't like this type of incest story, go read something else. I will. He has 3 stories which I will not bother to read. Whether this story is real or not, I find to son to be beyond egotistical, self-centered, selfish and arrogant. He is/was unaware or did not care if the mother is on birth control. Everything is "best thing in my life"; "I don't regret it for a second"; and " there is nothing more insulting to a proud man than pity." The son is not a man, he has accomplished nothing on his own, and he has nothing to be proud of.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I really hope this is fictional. I can't remember any MC that I like less than this guy. First, he rapes his mother when she was drunk. Then, knowing he is all she has, uses this knowledge to bend her to his will. The whole time telling her and himself how much he loves her. Ridiculous!!!!!! I couldn't finish the story, but I'm guessing he ends up turning his mom into his "mommy-slut," "his Whore," and passes her around all of his buddies and basically proves that he is a piece of shit.

TigersmanTigersman14 days ago

Good story!! I really liked the internal argument each participant is having.

OI8U2OI8U214 days ago

Wow this is an oldie, 10 years ago. Still, for six pages, mom put the brakes on too many times. Too much build up, when they should have been fucking, I got so sick of seeing "in to" when it should have been "into." Still love the tits on the avatar.

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