All Comments on 'Parlor'

liked it and will read what happens next.....just hope May tops Ian real good.....:p

I liked it. Would like to have Ian confess what his first time with May was like Very hot

You have the makings of a great author. I would recommend getting an editor though. They can help with catching little errors here and there. It really helped me in my writing. I look forward to more chapters and it would be great, as another commenter mentioned, to see how Ian came to know May's special touch and why he was so eager to let his girlfriend know that he had cheated on her with a tranny and was ok letting her know. It helps us to see the dynamic of their relationship. :)