All Comments on 'Trouble with the T-Girl at School'

by SugarandSalt

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griffin57griffin57about 10 years ago
glad you are back

Great story. Much more romantic than I thought it would be. Ivy is a sweetheart.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

Cool story! Hope to read of Colton's first time bottoming for Ivy! Or maybe Paul is a little jealous, he's the one who wants his ass reamed by her?

DaBlackMambaDaBlackMambaabout 10 years ago
Aww what?

I was totally looking forward to Colton bottoming. You gotta write a chapter of it, please!

ComproserComproserabout 10 years ago
You're Back!

Been waiting for you to return, and what a present you bring. Wasn't to into the face-sitting & rimming, but that's just a preference. It was still excellently written, and you've inspired me to finish my own story. See you around, Sugar

NearMissNearMissabout 10 years ago
Wooohooo!

You're back and with a fantastic new story! You're ability to craft these tender, loving stories with all that hot, steamy sex never ceases to amaze me! I have to admit I was a little disappointed when Colton didn't get bottomed, but I'll take whatever I can get. Here's to hoping another chapter or two comes out soon!

Joscelyn2tgJoscelyn2tgabout 10 years ago
Fabulous, Loved Your Characters...

...And especially liked the transition of thought within Colton. You captured young romance, the "desired" romance so well, a little rough as they learn about making love, and loving each other. Thanks for sharing another gem, and YES we love reading these stories... please keep writing them!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Amazing

Amazing as always. All your stories make me wish I was there taking it. Keep them coming.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Ugly

Just awful.

sebyiffysebyiffyabout 10 years ago
Returning on a high note

This was a really sweet story. Hot, too, like all your stories, but I do much prefer the ones about love (sappy, but whatevs). The sex was way hotter because the characters seemed really interested in each other beyond being holes to fill. And like a lot of the other commenters, I would love to see more of this pair.

notbreckenridgenotbreckenridgeabout 10 years ago
Well done

I really liked this. In two pages you gave me characters that I found interesting, and I thought the sex was good. I've read a number of your stories, and while you do create some similar circumstances, you give us a t-girl that I would really like to know.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
great job!

This is, in my own opinion, the best story that you've written! I would love to see this become a multi-part series; seeing Colton and Ivy's love grow is heart warming (and the sex gave me a boner out of this world.) More stories like this, please!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
very good

just love it from starte to finsh looking to more very soon yours leann5red

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Wow

As usual you made an amazing story. Pleeeeeeease continue!!! I want more! :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

another great t girl tale keep em cumming

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

she should breed him after he breeds her my gf and me do that with each other all the time and its so sexy and hot

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
dang

very nice story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

Love this story, but wish there was more build up with their romance and a bit less sex.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Good to see you back

I was waiting for your next story. This is it. You have talent with words. All your stories are just awesome. Please keep writing. :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Finally!

I love all your stories! This one was as amazing as always! Hope to read another one soon.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

Loved it. T-Girls and facesitting, a combination of my two favorite things in one story! I hope to read more like it!

greenhawk46greenhawk46about 10 years ago
good story

well-written, nice characters-great hot sex thanks

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Part 2?

I'd really love to see a part 2 of this, where Colton bottoms for Ivy, and because more submissive, and he has to deal with his old friends some more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
great to have you back!

I always look forward to your stories, was afraid you'd quit on us. Welcome back!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Wow

I jerked off 3 times from this story, its so good! Hope there will be part 2 for my two favourite loves.

davidjacquesdavidjacquesabout 10 years ago
About time!

But definitely well worth the wait. Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Cool!

will there be a part two?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Just Wonderful

Got to be one of the best, got. Me hard and ii have ED. Just great.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Please continue.

This is one hell of a story. I hope you continue Coltons and Ivys intimate adventure. 10 out of 10.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
great job

I love your stories, and was not dissapointed by this one! I really like your style of writing. It allows the reader to fill some of the exact details left out, and make a little bit of our own story. Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Yeah

This was a absolutely wonderful story! I really enjoyed it a lot. It's good to have you back at writing! ^^

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
excellet

Like all of your stories.

Joanne86Joanne86about 10 years ago

Beautiful story can we have a follow up please they make a really lovely couple.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Absolutely Beautiful!

This was one of the loveliest stories I ever read. Hopefully, someday soon I'll find a big buxom T-gal to sit on my face as often asshe wants. Awsome!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
GigglingSkull

This is so awesome. you should write a sequel. Love it like all of your stories.

uncomonnerduncomonnerdalmost 10 years ago
i got three words for you

MORE MORE MORE I love all your work girl iv been waiting for new work from you and was not disappointed keep em cumming big fan!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Holy Sh**T

Damn! this is some of the best stuff i have ever read! you have no clue how much id love to find a girl like this myself

xxjannxxjannalmost 10 years ago
we need a Part II

This story is worth a second chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
He should have bit her clit off when he had the chance.

And put an end to this nonsense.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Sequel

Please make a sequel and have ivy lick Colton's ass like he did her and put some hardcore assfucking

WoodSmithGuyWoodSmithGuyalmost 10 years ago
Awesome story

Look forward to reading more Tgirl fun stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
part 2 please

This is the best ever

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
another please

So hot please write a part 2 :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

once again another fine t girl story u can really deliver good storylines with the more romance themed tales

BiskitBiskitover 9 years ago
What fun!

Great dialog, very believable. I was hard and thinking about that big girl's butthole and my cock inside of her. I give it a star-spangled 5!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Fantastic as usual

You're an amazing writer. I check weekly to see if you've written a new story. Please keep 'em coming!

trouble654utrouble654uover 9 years ago
love to play with ivy

please write more love to find her myself

kriss4912kriss4912over 9 years ago
Welcome back

Missed your stories so much told with a true feeling and lots of detail

Great story not so long before the next one please

Had me captured from first sentence to last

Thank you xxx

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
OoooWweee! Damn, you make me feel her huge cock in my mouth! I can taste those thick loads of cum spattering my throat and soaking my tongue as I lick up the juicy cream!

Sorry, didn't know that was only the title section! LOL

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

verrrrrrryyyyyy gggggggooooooooooooooooooooooddddddddddd

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
NICE!

My gawd. There has to be a part 2 to this. Love the hint of romance and Ivy's bubble butt. Wish I was Colton. ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
More please!

Please continue this story. I love it and I want to read more. You are a truly gifted writer. Please continue this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Hot!

You got stroking my cock over here man, wow. I couldn't help but imagine sarina valentina the second i read bubble butt :). That just made the experience even better

TheFantasistTheFantasistover 8 years ago
Hot and romantic

I really like the emotional and relationship side of this story, how that develops and Ivy becomes his whole life.

The sex action is so hot, really sexy and well written.

Like all your stories, I wish it was happening to me!!!

Thanks SugarandSalt :o)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
MORE PLEASE

Excuse me but this lies unfinished and I really like Ivy so maybe (just maybe) write some more :)

wchesternywchesternyalmost 8 years ago
Love it!

Your story was awesome, can't wait to read the next chapter!! :)

xploring96xploring96about 7 years ago
Amazing but where is the rest

So well done. Can't believe you haven't followed up. It is obvious from her sitting on his face at the start and punching the guy that she has a dominant side. Would love to see anot her chapter where she slowly becomes the top in the relationship.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Couldn't have said it better .... Thanks for sharing.

Take it from a true T-Girl, this is the story we always dream about ... we know our lives are always going to be filled with insults, ridicule, meanness and even hatred ... still we always dream, hope and pray someday we might find the one boy that sees beyond the outer shell and find the lonely, passionate, ultra-feminine girl that lives just below the surface ... the one boy who is willing to let down his guard and allow us to show him how much love we have to give ... to allow us to ROCK his world and be the Best Girlfriend/Lover he has ever dreamed of finding. We live our lives starved for affection, kindness, human touch and love, still we carry inside ourselves the same overwhelming sex drive and erotic urges any healthy, red-blooded young man has. We dream of finding the one boy that will appreciate, cherish and maybe even adore the storehouse of femininity we hold inside, a boy who will show pride in being with us and is willing to display his mental, spiritual and physical affection towards us in public as well as behind closed doors. We don't expect raw lust drive sex at the mall or school hallways, T-Girls have morals and self-respect, those moments are saved for special private moments behind closed doors. Hold our hands, open a door for us, give us a hug and a soft kiss on the cheek, appropriate signs of affection when in public are what ALL girls live for but mostly just show the world that you are proud to be with us.

Another chapter or two filled with affection, love and romance; laced with special time full of lust driven sexual passion and naughty actions only appropriate behind closed doors would be amazing and satisfying to hungry admires of your amazing writing talents and imagination.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Mord

I need so much more 😢

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
You are the best.

I absolutely love all of your stories. I hope you write another one soon. I am you devoted reader😍

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
More please

Please write a sequel with facesitting

bigcowboy36bigcowboy36almost 4 years ago

please write a sequel

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great story. Need more chapters

This was a great Tgirl story. most are about domineering Tgirls rather than loving relationships. It would be great if you can write more chapters.

Royse69Royse69about 3 years ago

Wonderful

Its a great tgirl romance, I love how it progressed. I love how both of them were going to stand up for each other.

I do hope you write more chapters

Thank you

Client8Client8over 2 years ago

Started off good but left us hanging without describing him getting fucked

ShortyMacShortyMacabout 2 years ago

Hope there’s going to be a part two coming our way.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Hot and also sweet.

RodimusMikeRodimusMikeover 1 year ago
Turning a negative into a positive.

For this story to turn out the way it did was just mindblowing and brilliant.Coltan insulted Ivy by calling her fat,not the usual Tranny or Shemale but Fat,and Ivy took offence to that and sat on his face and told him to kiss her asshole.

But thru it all both Coltan and Ivy made up and got close to eventually have sex with eachother,and become a couple.But Coltan's Ex-Friend Paul made it clear what a type of friend he was and abandoned Coltan fast as lightning,and later even referred to him as a faggot,but Ivy being protective of Coltan slugged Paul for his racism.

Also I think Coltan took a page out of Ivy's book to not let labels hurt him. As for Ivy & Coltan I think they make a great couple that it shouldn't matter what one person has between their legs but whats on the inside.Truly a touching story.

ashlandlitashlandlitover 1 year ago

More on please! Such a great story-you really have talent. Thanks for writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

This was a hot and sweet story.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Well, again not into a guy blowing another guy but this story, and others by this author, seems much more loving and caring than many others. Too bad the author did not follow up with this story (and others) to enrich a deeper understanding of each other.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

I loved it. It's nice to finally read a story about these 2 and the shemale isn't being domineering! That they are in this 50/50. It turned me on and had precum.......!

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

She is a gigantic woman and he loves it. Seducing him with an impromptu facesitting was odd to say the least. Now that they are doing more, I like her face-fucking him and he has the chance to orally service her. All this is just interesting fantasy, as us deviants think about sex. I doubt many mrn who are reading this are extremely kinky in real life.🫢🤫🤔

Beejay3Beejay34 months ago

Very satisfying story..as 2people developed a warmth and good feelings between them in spite of the ostracism they both faced at school!…overcoming the negative vibes to achieve a sexual journey!

Thanks for that story.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Not bad

Not particularly good either

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