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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous03/01/04

Damn!

Talk about ironic...


~Angel

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by Sir_Nathan03/17/04

O man....

Only a sick sick mind could have thought of that...

Fucking brilliant!!!

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by Anonymous05/20/04

disturbing

brilliantly disturbing, poor mom and jessica. what will happen to them?

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SO GOOD!

usually i don't comment much but this was so fuckin' fantastic!

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by Anonymous09/15/04

Wicked and twisted and truely brillient

Yours is a tale of astonishing perplexity. The ending just made the floor drop out from under me. I loved it, but you are wicked!

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by Anonymous08/29/05

how embarrassing!!

OMG that's awful! man, and i though *kinky* people were sick and twisted, but you really take the cake! brilliantly plot twist; i totally wasn't expecting that.

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by Anonymous12/12/05

Hey

The idea of doing a phone conversation was original and the ending was great

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by Anonymous01/06/07

Evil

Brilliantly, wickedly, delightfully, evil.

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by Anonymous08/27/07

so hot!

I loved it. It was hot and surprising. I would love to know what nasty action cums next.

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by Anonymous09/23/07

phone call

So did you and your daughter live out what you said on the phone ? Maybe in your next story you and your daughter can taste each other, maybe fist each other. Did you really put your whole fist in your pussy ? Awesome !

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by Anonymous06/08/09

Ha

hahahaha funniest story ever

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by Anonymous12/03/10

OMG!

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by StryWrter712/31/10

Awesome Twist

Normally I don't like stories written this way (conversation back and forth without context of who is doing which side of the conversation and other details thrown in) ....but I followed yours very well.
now, to go on and see what is in store for this very foolish mother who admitted this stuff on the phone!

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