All Comments on 'Melanie's Seduction Ch. 02'

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whtyelcplwhtyelcplabout 10 years ago
Happy to see this story progress!

Like to sex the sex scenes fleshed out a bit more. Melanie on waking the next day will reflect on what has happened the previous night. Take stock of the physical and mental trauma inflected on her. Hopefully the next chapter will be available soon

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Please continue this story!

It's amazing

Lynn_MXXLynn_MXXalmost 10 years ago
Very Good

He should have seduced her with a kiss, though. Maybe he did, but we didn't find out about it until right at the end

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Lol crap

Black men are not superior lovers than white men...

Delusional aren't you....

No race is sexually superior over the other...

There are black men who are great lovers and their are white men who are great lovers.

There a black men with large cocks, average size cocks, small cocks and micro cocks..

There are white men with large cocks, average size cocks, small cocks and micro cocks....

So in other words...

Your story is crap lol

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Fantasic build up ruined

Story was very well built up and written... Only for the main to rape her, this was not necessary as she was there for the taking imo. A bit time drawing out the seduction scene perhaps and saving him cumming in her the first time for another chapter.

The rape theme for me ruined what I thought was one of the better interracial storys I have seen in a long while.

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