All Comments on 'Falling Home Ch. 07'

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redlion75redlion75about 10 years ago

her friend is going to cause her to lose nat before she gets her

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

Nat is the bartender?? Would be super cool:)

tygztygzabout 10 years ago

Still loving the buildup here, but Adi's reaction to Shea makes me wonder if she's just finding out that she's lesbian in general and her not-quite-a-fling with Natalie was just timely coincidence … which would be sad, as Adi hasn't been written as a floozy at all, and jumping into something with Shea seems quite out of character.

Hopefully they get together a bit, and Adi realizes that while she is really lesbian, she doesn't want just anyone.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

redlion75redlion75almost 10 years ago

did we lose another writer to the ether

Arago007Arago007almost 10 years ago
How did I kiss this?

I love this series, but it's being doled out so slowly... Please, if you see a new chapter posted, send me a message!

I liked this chapter, but I am wanting to see Natalie and Adi back together.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
next chapter?

where is next part...?? please complete your story. what happened to nat and adi?

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
We want more - please

This story is going so well you can't leave it hanging time this!

tygztygzover 7 years ago

Warning to anyone who sees this - it's a fantastic story, and you shouldn't miss it - but be aware that it's apparently permanently unfinished :(

Nerdyqueen94Nerdyqueen94almost 3 years ago

Oh the bitter tragedy of an unfinished tale.

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