All Comments on 'All Is Fair'

This is a great start, I can't wait to read the rest.

Proof read a little better! The language is a bit annoying...

Good story, please continue.

You captured my attention right away with the mystery and a little drama. Can't wait for the next chapter!!

You are doing good. Can't wait to read next chapter.

definitely hate the sister. "i abandoned my little sister cause I'm disgustingly selfish, but now i feel bad. poor me." please. i hope her sister hates her guts, and refuses to forgive or acknowledge her.

frankly, it sounds like the younger sister was a the better sister. hope to see more. it's a great start.

feels like there's some back story with this vampire and the girls' family that we don't know yet. also, the vampire claims ownership. i can't imagine that he'll give up just because the wolves have her now. i think they are going to regret not killing him when they had the chance.

I'm obsessed already! Please write more!

Bloody Brilliant! Another story to add to my favourites list. Please keep the chapters coming fast. :)

great start so far. would love to know what happened next

Off to a very good start, looking forward to the next chapter.

Great start!! Cant wait to read more

Thank you for the feedback! This is my first attempt so it is great to hear your thoughts/suggestions. The next few chapters are all done and ready to go!

Go ahead and reel me in! Can't wait for more updates to see where this will go. Way to set this up :-)

Amazing start to this story! It starts very well thought out and you have me wanting more! Luckily there's plenty of chapters for me to continue with :D

If she was printed, it means she was caught. A thief that was caught multiple times is anything but skilled.