All Comments on 'Family is Not Blood Ch. 04'

you are writing a full fledged cuck wimp story of giant proportions

forgiveness does not mean taking someone back. Forgive and forget. Once a cheater, the mental aspects of it, always a cheater. You can never trust her again.

I never cease to be amazed that comments posted seem to suggest that these stories are factual. Get real people: it is fiction, and as such need to be read and enjoyed. I admire any author who is able to write a story, something I can't do. To Wieliczka, keep writing. I am enjoying the story.

For those of you criticizing any author I ask the question: If you can do better, then why aren't you doing it?

Nice story, very realistic.

Thanks for your gift!

SliperyRox

Oh by the way, I noticed another cowardly troll abusing you for your efforts,

remember gastric expulsions are what they are... try to ignore them, open a window if need be. They go away..... fade into the sunset, Wink Wink.

I know crap when I see it.

1*

For sharing.

Thanks for the effort.

No violent emotional storms just a logical but surprising development. Could it be that many people read Loving Wives to feel anger and hate?

over the hard conversations? What a total cop out. Why bother writing the story?

This was more of an .... ?

Very good, I am enjoying your story very much hence the 5 star rating.

I have read any of your later stories (soon to be rectified). The only criticism I would pass is to have someone edit your work, I as the reader do it and because your story outline is so good it is worth it!

2stars. Grammar and syntax errors notwithstanding, this is horrible. This series becomes less and less believeable. Such extreme EVIL in part 1 to this reconcilliation bullshit?