All Comments on 'Trust Fall Ch. 11'

Interesting self study.

This a wonderful tale, remarkably well narrated. I thoroughly enjoyed all 11 chapters. This last chapter left me wanting more. I can hardly wait till you post the rest. My critique -- for what it's worth -- is with the apparent conclusion Tess draws that she does not love Ben Sheppard and that she can't love him because he is so much more advanced toward self actualization. In her words the relationship would be more like a mentor/ protégé. While it is true that, up to now, Ben has done all the teaching/guiding/ leading, there is nothing to indicate that Ben's mind is closed to new and exciting ideas. In short I think their love is already manifest and it deserves a chance to bloom and mature in the coming second and third parts of the trilogy.CONGRATULATIONS.......