All Comments on 'I Saw My Wife Fucking on the Net'

you don't HAVE to live with it. You're CHOOSING to live with it. Why should your spouse respect you when you don't respect yourself?

Another unusual story from a talented writer of erotic fiction stories...a different kind of story...and a fun twist..like it!

Another 5star story to add to your long list of well written works of pornographic fiction..

And another asinine anonymous comment from someone who doesn't like the character's lifestyle choice.

Hey anonymous, lighten up.! It's fiction and it's in the Humor and Satire category

Where do you get these story ideas?

Great to see a really good story with a pragmatic outcome.

about guys that are at 10 times the risk of hiv of white guys?

Another good one...... somehow..... I envision u needing BBC.......wanna hear ur stories

An interesting angle - I rather liked it,

is wha it is.20 years a cuckhold..Id sell the family jewels and fuck some of the best pussy money could buy. when Ky finds out say well hell dear I have 20 years of catching up to do once a week with you is not enough and since youre fucking niggers I may as well fuck some nice pussy also.Sorrry they all cost 500 a pop Sorry youi will just have to help more with the bills at home till I catch up...or lol find me a regular lover for 3 times a week. She needs to be 120 to 130 5 ft 1 to 5 ft 6 hair color np pussy shaved likes to suck cock take it in the ass and likes having toys and fingers used on her. Also needs to love oral...34 to 36 inch top b to d cup. If you can find two or three women in those categories you can still have your extra on the side and we can continue to live together..other wise im sorry divorce is the only answer..maybe you can get bobby to divorce betty or otherwise she will divorce him once she finds out hes fuckin you anyway

Well written with good mechanics and at least it's different....and interesting....but the resolution is tepid. Still, it's worth a read.

Maybe this is more realistic than BTB or divorce or reconciliation.

On the other hand, I don't have to be happy about the ending.

Personally, I think he should have just told her he loved her but he knew he couldn't satisfy her and he knew she couldn't give up black dick--so he was leaving.

Too bad, so sad.

Can't sit around knowing you're betraying me even if it is because I can't deliver what you need. Good bye.

That's your ending? Sorry. That was simply god awful.

Lynn,

A bit boring but better that the Great hunter.

I liked your direct approach but would have preferred a male better endowed with staying power to compete and perhaps end up with some black pussy. . . ? ?

Not nearly up to previous offerings. A very weak and non believable ending.

Made my dick hard :)

Where is next chapter? Come on and give us what we want! Burn the bitch!

Thank you for sharing!

Could not enjoy this story. If there is another chapter, it will be a cuckold story. I can see it moving in that direction.

Congrats!

tales of the mentally ill aren't erotic

Man with sub-standard equipment seeks woman with undersized vagina for fun and possible relationship. Four inches hard, not very thick. Reply to "bittydick@gmail.com" #277al8B7732

Another great story, Lynn. Hope there's more to come!

thanks for amusing my mind once again.....

Straight white guys find this dogg shit funny or erotic? This shit is fucking sick.

love the big titted wife stories.......

and on so many levels.

a wife who cheats. a husband who smiles and does nothing. the use of racial slurs. and the unneeded humiliation of BBC vs undersized genitalia.

too silly to even be sad

worth reading. Quit after I got the the 4" dick and 5 minute fuck.

Please Literotica, add the option to vote zero.

Sorry Lynn as I usually like your stuff but this was not enjoyable to read. Don't need the racial slurs and it is just to down for the husband to make it enjoyable to read.

Great story perhaps unlike the others I have a 4" dick and go for 10 minutes on a good day. So I know and sympathise with the people in this story. In fact I wish there were more stories like this. Well done LynnGKS

It was ok but you have wrote better stories

Thanks for posting!

Seriously???? She needs to pay for her crimes, and big time. You have a good story started here but it needs a real ending. Stop half assing and finish it like a real writer.

this one left me a bit confused , nice angle on the topic , not into the N word , so that did spoil it a bit for me ,

each time you used it , i was lifted out of that special place i go in my brain when reading well written storys .

gave it 4 star vote.

xxxxhugsxxxx

p.s to the haters&flamers ...

stop bitching about other pples work & get off your ass & write something

I liked this, it was well written and there wasn't any screaming or revenge or other BTB things. In a way it was humorous although it was a bit short, more like part of a bigger story. The N word did bother me, it was a jarring note. Still and all, full marks and I'll go try some more of this author's stories.

That all this is if she such a cock slut then why marry a guy with a little dick find a big dick guy and marry him. All she did was hang horns on the poor fool and lie and disrespect him .

they say love is everything, bull with out respect caring and equality the marriage is shit

Not funny and not worth the time reading it.

negative rating

4 inch got money is why she married him ,classic

suggestion:

Betty toasts their new project - she says, "Let's work on teaching you how to make women so thrilled with you that they don't even notice the size of your dick. Come upstairs with me..."

But where have you gone? I haven't seen your byline in a long time. You have a following that needs more of your writings. A sequel to this one would be a good place to start again. I'd like to read more about the adventures of Kay and John, who remind me of a couple I knew well some years ago.

I have seen over a dozen photos of my sister-in-law fucking on the Internet.

I've read it before, but must have been a while because it didn't sound familiar for a couple of paragraphs, and I couldn't remember how it ended.

The husband should tell the wife he knows, tell her she can do what she gotta, but find out for sure if she really loves him. Then tell her to keep going. If it was me in that situation I'd ask her to use the spare room though, there's just something rude about doing it in the marriage bed. Even if it's not that good in the sack, she should leave him some dignity.

Of course it's just fiction. God knows what I'd do in real life. Oh yeah, its fiction, Damn good fiction.

Continuation from my previous comment.

I love how the author brought in a mention of Rich and Carolyn Ames - from the story sieries entitled something like "Conversations with my wife". In that one Carolyn got caught having sex with college kids, even threesomes, when she got the clap from someone and gave it to her husband Rich.

I love it when there's little tidbits from one story in another story.

Lynn, I don't know where you have gone -- or why. I enjoyed almost everything you wrote for Literotica. I particularly liked this story about Kay and John, who, as I said in an earlier comment, had a lot in common with a couple I used to know very well. Maybe you could write a sequel as your first story back on the job you did so well! I'd like to read about Kay's current photographer and John's take on his equipment.