by O_J_Flintstone
I have already enjoyed your other story with the old guy and the motorhome. Must admit I would love to know more about the old guy and the adventures he probably had with the items of jewelery!
But will be content to know what happens in this story, sounds like nothing good is going to happen lol
story lacks depth and reads like an attempt to be artistic, a bad attempt.
nuf said...
I hope you finish this story some time I would love to see where it goes. :D
Phill