All Comments on 'Marcus and Dad Pt. 01'

Not sure your level of pervertedness will be appreciated on this site but I for one found it incredibly nasty hot. It was short but sweet- kind like how the narrator's toot was. I want to read more. Let him get in there and rim Daddy's fart hole and keep the gas coming....right up the son's nose and across his tongue. (I once had a dude accidentally fart right in my mouth when I was rimming him and I came almost instantly.) Good job you freak.

Go find a site that caters for this weird, sick shit and quit polluting this one; your pathetic scores should indicate just how much the readers here don't like this kind of ass-obsessed garbage - find a scat site and indulge your shitbox fantasies there, read and understand the category, you mental midget...

I hope there is sequel in works. I think it would be be hot if his dad takes a hot steaming dump into his sons hungry mouth.

WTF??!?? If there could be a negative score, I would have opted for that. Fucking gross.

Your lack of talent is eclipsed only by your selection of subject matter.

You may want to try a plot twist and have the son run over by a semi roaring out of papa's ass...

19. That pretty much says it all. I agree with one other commentator : sick and Whiskey Tango Foxtrot???

My nephew and I do this all the time. Funny as hell. Fuck all the nay-sayers!!!

Comments better than story. Are you sure you are 19. Sounded more like something from an immature 12 year old. The good thing was it was short so I only wasted 2 minutes of my life. Do not continue or write another story. You have about as much talent as you have cock, little.

Da fuq is this? ):

Nice start, now what else you got. Who gets fucked first.

I like this chapter. Fuck all those who don't!! Keep writing this!!

Please, for the love of all that is arousing, never attempt to author another erotic story again.

More please.

This is garbage. Please do not write any more. Find another site to post this to, it's disgusting and just bad.

Dont continue this shit was lame and nasty u sick fucker!

Well done! My dad and I share close-up farts regularly. Always fucking sexy!

Ok so don't listen to all the negative people keep writing and make it longer :)

This is really good and keep going 'don't listen to those dumb farts' because they are the ones that searched this up in the first place and decided to read it so to put it nicely tell them to get their head out of your ass. Anyway the suspension is killing me so hurry up and update!

I'm not a big fan of flatulence or things like that, but this turns me on so much. Please continue, haters gonna hate, just keep doing what you're doing :D

I hope there's scat involved in this. That would be hot, not enough of that here.

Write more... I love fart play, and it's the sort of unsuspecting father/son activity that can be so hot!

Make more, very good.

Why there isn't a Pt 02? This is such a hot and different story. More please.

Fuck that turned me on. I want more.

Part 2? please?

OMG PLEASE CONTINUE! THIS IS FUCKING HOT! JUST DO IT WITH FACESITTING PLEASE!!!

And you can put in some scat if you want, but this is so hot... And describe farts as more stinkier and put a rimjob or at least facesitting... Those are my advices... This is so hottttt! Omg i was jerking off... I would want to be on the son's place...

Urgh.

I know you’re young but I can’t believe what I just read, it was awful!

There was nothing sexy, hot or interesting about it..

maybe it’s more suited for your private collection if it’s your type of this but it was terrible.

I would concentrate on other things and not writing..