All Comments on 'Playing For Keeps Ch. 03'

wish Lit allowed multiple categories... this story fits solidly in both.

either way i keep lovin' it. really awesome story. looking forward to ch. 04!

it would be a better story without either the nonhuman or bdsm. pick one and get rid of the other.there is enough of the macho caveman attitude in regular nonhuman stories and the bdsm conflicts with the mates claim of never hurting the other.being forced to do something by your mate ruins the aspect of being an alpha if you are unable to stand up for the rest of your pride/pack to the alpha if your mate is also your dom/master.

I respectfully disagree with redlion. I like the combination of nonhuman and bdsm very much. And I don't think bdsm conflicts with never hurting your mate... You just have to make sure she likes it!