All Comments on 'Birthday Surprise Ch. 01'

great story, eagerly waiting for next chapter

A great start. I love all of your stories. Thank you so much for sharing. I hope to read more soon!

Outstanding and I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Thanks

Waiting for the next chapter:-)

With knickers in his mouth and taped up so that he can not expel them, and he is lying on his back as well. A recipe for disaster. I like that there is devotional talk between them but it is moronic and repetitious demonstrating a sort of lazy and cold attitude to the relationship. It is the idea of a loving exchange between them that I like and not as that is rolled out here. His begging is babyish and whinny and should have attracted reproof and a reminder of what will happen soon enough if it continues