All Comments on 'Desires within Young Girls Ch. 06'

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AverygoodlayAverygoodlayabout 10 years ago
Confession?

Confession? Doesn't make for a good story, Getting tired of the BS! Chapter 6 and it sucks more and more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
sometimes its better to let bones stay buried

I think we all wander if our dreams & fanteseas.are about the younger. Generation sre a desire to have

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Don't stop.

Don't stop. Continue. Ignore ugly what's his name!

roxygrrlroxygrrlabout 10 years ago
Great story so far.

I'm really enjoying the story so far and look forward to reading more. I'm patient and don't mind the slow pace you've set. It would be a shame if you didn't finish this tale.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
amazing

I love the way you are writing this, looking forward to upcoming chapters! when will it be?

volodarvolodarabout 10 years ago
averygoodlay???

lots of looser pornsites out there. go there.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Follow That Plot..........

Beautifully written. Character development, delving into their thought process, adds a bit of intrigue and a tease of what's to come.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

This story is so fucken good.

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