All Comments on 'A Lazy Day By The Pool'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

Wow! Chapter 2, please. How about that ass next time.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Brilliant

Great story…look forward to chapter 2

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
great story

very well written

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Mmmmmmmmmm.

I wish I was as brave as Caroline. I really want to know what happens next?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
You think you must never ever do that again...

but really, Caroline, you are on a holiday, you have been left alone, and you know that you will do it again if Dave wants you... Chapter 2?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Great first chapter

Fantastic story but now I want to know what happens next. When will Dave ravish Caroline again?

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Harry Floyd (ask me nicely and I might tell you my real name). Enjoyer of erotic literature and sexy images etc.