All Comments on 'Rajni Fucked by Her Brother'

i like it . i like to fuck my own sister.as your sister she also has a beautyful body she has 36 boobs and 38 gand.i always lick her panty and bra. it makes me very much horny.i also make prog.as you have been made.thanks for the idea.

Please proof read your story before submitting it. The story contains lots of error. No comma, or period makes it very hard to follow through the story line. Also try to refrain yourself from using excessive amount of jargons.

Valima is a ceremony in Muslim marriages, here u have Hindu protagonists...so very inaccurate

Well it is wonderfull story but the names were hindu.i really loved it n wana more stories like that from u

You hinus when you will be able to learn that you are not muslims or pakistanis , layoff and write story of your own people not muslims with hindu names,

this is the lousiest story i have seen on this site. completely substandard, very poor effort. and there is no need to try to be what u ain't. try doing something else that u can do better!!

u tried to write well but u couldnt poor guy this is not a real one its all that wich is going in ur mind

what a story

Wow!

That was really bad. The story had no flow to it at all, and reading it gave me a headache because your sentences NEVER ENDED.

I know most people just want to get to the sex part of the stories, but your writing makes it too much of a chore to continue on to anything exciting; provided your story ever gets exciting.

Please take some time off from posting your stories until you learn how to write.

Good luck with that!

THAT STORY WAS SOME BULLSHIT YOU SHOULD GIVE UP WRITTING AND GO KILL YOURESELF YOU DUMB MUTHAFUCKA

i could go on and on and on like you. that's a very very bad writing. should have got it edited.

The writing was very poorly written...you can tell the author did not go to school to study or else it would have been written better. Overall...this writer needs to find a better hobby!!!

this is without a doubt the worse story i've read on the site .this was just plain BAD!!!

YOU ARE NOT A PAKISTANI BUT A HINDU AND INDIAN. WHY DONT YOU GIVE THE CREDIT TO YOUR COUNTRY OF YOUR BULLSHIT.

God damn..why to use Hindu names...

pakistani girl can contact me

am.ash76@yahoo.com

gandu ki aulad murree main apni behn chod aya ja ab sonia ghandhi (teri maa) us ko bhi chod lay

A pathetic story with Pakistani locations and Hindu names, wonderful. The author seems to be a racist or probably he didn't have the guts to use Indian locations. Needless to say his English is no English at all. Get a new hobby or go drown your pathetic self is all I have to say.

machikne randikobhahan you didnt get anyone else? you osama ko najayaj chora you will get screwed by laloo yadav ?

machikne never have it again

thinking of incest you will get screwed

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Wtf? No fullstops. No commas. and i still read ur shit thinking the story must be nice . . How much mistaken i was. . This it withot doubt the worst story i came across. . freaking jerk . . Go fuck off. .

this was a rape,, she didnt want him to fuck her she begged his to stop and he would not,,, it is rape

Could be worse, but I don't know how.

Why she ask to share bed sheet

This is not consensual incest, it is rape. She begs and cries for him to stop but he forces her. Also, really poorly written.