All Comments on 'Family is Not Blood Ch. 07'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
That's your experience Bro

Mine consist of bickering and fights with step siblings and the word' bastard 'is often thrown around.The mother who had a bastard kid never really got over her guilt and had become alcoholic later. A "re-built" marriage with the same individual is very rare and the survival rate for the second round is negligible.In most cases, a complete separation is recommended highly especially when there is no "kid" around.Your story took another path

you make the protagonist guilty of a 'crime' of leaking the rubber hose and he is prepared to accept responsibility for the naughty action,very rare indeed.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
please stop

Keep your problems to your self All your stories are boring and rubbish!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Insight

It was a good story. Gave us an insight of how a close knit Polish family from Chicago dealt with a string of familial events. Some characters I liked, some I didnt. But that's real life. Thanks for the stories!

dyonysosdyonysosover 9 years ago

I spent some time in poland over the years and i know one thing that i know about poles ,they take family very seriously ,even if sometimes they don't like eachother very much they will allways help eachother

I think that only a pole could write a story like this,it needs allso a pole to understand it completly

As to divorced people who remarry i know a few couples that once divorced came back together after a while ,not necessarely remarry but are still together and doing very well,i think we all make mistakes and the grass is allways greener at the other side and doesn't it take great caracter to admit ones mistakes ?

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Been there

I lived this my-self. Restarted and now, over 40 years later, we are still happily together; never any regrets.

Good story - without the explicit sex, it would have been even better.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Real world representation

I really dislike the BTB genre since it is basically a black and white view of people and rather boring. Kind of "Dick and Jane" for adults. Your stories develop complex characters and inter-relationships that are far more satisfying and representative of real life, at least as I have seen it. The nice thing is the element of hope that is delivered and the sense and power of underlying love that can sustain a relationship when buffeted by other tragedies or human errors. Holding to one another, or having a safety net of relationships can literally be life saving. Thank you for sharing your craft with us and please continue.

EddboyEddboyover 8 years ago
realistically

i just dont see anybody trying again after being cheated on for 3 years

bruce22bruce22over 8 years ago
Thanks for your hard work

The characters and their problems are well presented. For me it was a very interesting trip. Yes you are right, you foresaw most of the problems that the readers felt.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
3 years of cheating

And you think that's forgivable⁉️🙀 I really really hate your stories they ALL end up being RAAC story. What person in their right mind would take a person back that's been smashing a friend for 3 fucking years and NEVER had any intentions of stopping until caught/confronted. For 3 years she deceived him/lied to him, did things with Corey she refused him but I'm suppose to feel all gooey inside because he forgave the tramp.. 3 years of plotting 3 years of betrayal with no end in sight and here this pussy cum sucker writer wants me to believe that a whore that has been cheating, lieing, sucking, fucking a friend for 3 years can change😂😂😂 why didn't she change before she got caught? Why didn't she stop after the first time? I don't see why this story have a high rating and than I realized this is literotica--packed with undercover faggot cucks who LOVES stories like this.. Author had the nerve to put this bullshit in the romance section when there wasn't a fucking thing romantic about this cuck story.. Suck a cock faggot

wieliczkawieliczkaalmost 8 years agoAuthor
Sometimes I look at the comments and the previous one was intersting

I think that it said much more about anonymous than could ever be said about my story. It's down to a wold view. Are you stuck in your own vision of the world, or are you flexible? Your call, and your life. I'm not in charge and I do know that people do change, sometimes. I wish the previous anonymous the best life they allow themselves to have.

goalie52goalie52over 7 years ago
Well Done

Great story! I prefer stories that end according to the way the characters "wind up." It started out as a BTB ending to a reconciliation to a re-committing to each other. It was the way the main characters grew and learned from their mistakes that allowed the ending to be the right one. Great job!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Rubbish !

She cheats on him for YEARS . Not a few days , weeks , or even a couple of months. YEARS ! The reality portrayed in the story is just----------LAUGHABLE !

staliesinstaliesinover 7 years ago
Another take

To err is human, to forgive is divine. For those who have never changed their opinion about something, or someone, due to new information, blindness is not just a visual problem. Nice work.

Schwanze1Schwanze1almost 7 years ago
Thanks

Fascinating and complex story.

As to the cuckfag screamers, I figure the guilty dog often barks first.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
I get your points

I get your points but I do lean to follow those who say that she cheated on him for years without any remorse. My problem with your story is that as you wrote it, it was one sided love. The husband loved her and never really lost her love for her. She never loved him. Not in the way you wrote her. She was cheating on him for years. She didnt' care or noticed any change in his behavior while he was collecting evidence. You failed to to picture us a loving couple where the wife strayed. You just pictured us a slef-centred, selfish person who never loved anyone but herself.

So I can understand that she can change as a person, but there was not love to rebuild, because there was never love from her side in the first place.

My second, problem comes from giving second chances to someone who is obviously damaged good. If you are single and you can find a really loving new girl who shares your values, why on Earth would y ou like to risk your heart to try again with a cheating slut who never loved you in the first place? You know that statistics show that the chance for a cheater to cheat again are really high. I would have bought yourplot if the kid was his, but it was not. So he had to accept a selfish cheater the never loved him, and her lover's child. It wouldnt have been easier for him to start over again with a truly loving woman having childs of his own?

You wrote about a saint (or a wimp depending of whom you ask). No real man would have done what he did.

Nicely written story. I enjoyed the ride, but for me the storyline was flawed from the start.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Interesing

To note that he went to great lengths to expose his cheating wife and involved his family and friends when at the end, he took her back and asked for a second chance. I am very partial to stories with cheating, and I enjoy reconciliation of married couple, but this is not one of them. The premise of the wife's cheating and the husband's revenge don't add up to the whole story. I understand the writer wanted to explore complex relationships, forgiveness, and reconciliation. The dialogue is very melodramatic, and the wife's character is bland. Overall, the idea behind the story is very promising. However, the execution of the characters and the reconciliation are very poorly done

Rancher46Rancher46almost 3 years ago

Was a great read, where some might agree with this reconciliation and some might say that Mike was a weak cuckold. The fact is that this whole story was a trial of faith, love and understanding and in the end they both grew up and fell in love again.

alvinjfrazieralvinjfrazieralmost 2 years ago

4stars. I honestly feel that what you wrote here was better than your entire series. (EXCEPT PT1 - THAT WAS ALMOST GREAT!) I truly appreciate what you've expressed on THIS page. I just don't think you are a storyteller. Sorry if I've been offensive. I truly do believe in freedom of speech. Yours, mine, and everyone else.

arsenelupin66arsenelupin66over 1 year ago

The aspect of this story that worked best for me was the sense of community that the author developed; I infer from the title that this was one of his intentions. The aspect that didn't work for me as well was the belivability of the reconciliation, it felt to me artificial and far too rushed and compressed; it seemed to me that the issue of the morality of the guy puncturing the condoms was ignored, as well as the resent that would have been generated in his wife. Lastly, this story was incredibly poorly proof read, it was filled with errors that distorted the meaning of sentences, and at one point the name of the baby was misstated; there really is no excuse for this level of sloppiness given that there are many people on this site willing to edit and proofread.

WargamerWargamerover 1 year ago

Fucking awful story.

God help me author, what the fuck is wrong with you?

You actually think this is a decent story don’t you?

God help us from people like you.

Scores 1/5 and that’s even too much.

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I am married to my first (and only ) wife of 38 years. Only in my extended family, (two continents) has there ever been unfaithfulness. There has been divorces, remarriage, trials and tribulations. Life is messy, I look toward building bridges, not tearing them down. In th...

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