All Comments on 'Neighborhood Milf Ch. 03'

I rated this a 3. The author should have just let the story go with the flow instead of trying to stay in control.

Please continue this hot series

You should team up Mrs. Jensen and Mrs. Davis on boys cock. This third part didn't do much for me...

3/5

Thank you! Please continue with more chapters soon.

That is a nice erotic and sensuous story. I liked all of them but this one has a certain potential.... I also like the sentiment expressed by others above to include his previous conquests in future chapters and continue your excellent stories.

Thanks

TA

Great stuff and makes us want more from your fertile mind and heart. Hurry up, we're anxious!!!!

From the title I inferred it was to about him and the first MILF. Don't take me wrong, the series is good -- a little cliched of the average guy who becomes the neighborhood stud -- but in that framework, a good take on the cliche.

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Since you're expanding it outside of the first MILF and if you're thinking of doing more, than, yeah, him with two of the MILFs at one time seems to be the obvious track. If ya really want to tie things together, I was thinking along the lines of him nailing the teacher he was eyeing in the first chapter.

He shouldn't go to college! Stay home and charge the wives. Then, charge the husbands for keeping their home life calm. And after work fuck the daughters.

Pretty good basic story. Each event could have been a little bit longer, never got back to any of the original women to do follow ups, or to have a group event. Could use some anal, especially this last lady since he was so enthralled with her ass. Could have done his mother, and like the other guy said he could do some of the daughters. The second mother even offered her daughter up to him. For a whole summer, not very many encounters, like I said could have gone back for follow ups. One other thing, you used the word "messaging" several times when it should have been "massaging". And the story started off with one of his teachers. She should have been one of his conquests after he graduated.

Thanks for writing this story. It takes me back to some of my favourite fantasies when I was the age of your character.

One little inconsistency in this story, which you might want to address if you are going to publish this elsewhere: make up your mind on the size of her breasts and stick with that. At the beginning, you said that they were, relative to the other two MILFs, "small" and "perky" but during the story you described them as "heavy" and "huge". Small and perky tits can be exciting too, especially on the right woman.

This one little inconsistency kept me from really immersing my imagination into your story. Still a very good read, but it could be a little better.

But the thoughts and actions help flesh it out!

Re read aloud and you will get those problem areas corrected next time.

still graphically erotic to my mind - literally eat it up! Ha

Petite - small in figure, tiny.

The average American woman is 5' 4".

Almost any 18 year old male can wrap his arms around a 50" waist.

Flunked 8th grade again, didn't you?

Another neighbor gets the prong from her son's best friend. One lucky guy and the wording was such you got another deserved five stars. Keep this up until every house in the neighborhood has happy housewives.

But I can't get over the notion that all three of the boy's MILFS call their breasts "titties". And all three like to have their breasts sucked, and fucked. I did enjoy the boy doing Mrs. Taylor in the multi-shower so he can go home... clean in body, clean in mind, take your pick! And I do hope on one of his return home trips, the boy finds his mom horny for her son, and wanting to have her titties fucked.

Thanx!

Instead of his mom wanting him, I hope he goes home sometime and discovers her with one of his friends.

I want to move and live there. Every woman must have been an NFL cheerleader or a beauty pageant winner in her 20's. This was a good story, because it stood alone. Chapter 2 was a followup to chapter one, but this story was independent and never mentioned the other women. He even had a new best friend in this story so there could be a new hot mom.

There is a common theme that the husbands are preoccupied with their work, take their gorgeous wife for granted, and neglect her. I'm wondering if the author has observed this in life and taken advantage of the offerings - whether as a maturing boy or as a young man.

I do wish Chris had gone back and visited Mrs. Jensen (chapt 1) while her husband was on his business trip. Also, it would have been fun for him to spend the day with Mrs. Davis (chapt 2) while herr son was at work. In both cases, no need for shyness; just wild sex with the Milfs spending as long as needed to milk him dry. Meanwhile, please return to Mrs. Taylor soon.

Thanks for sharing.

You use the tiled wall, or the floor, of the shower but NOT the glass door or glass wall.

I would also like to fuck Mrs Taylor - when he was 16 Phillip Lamovie cut loose and fucked his blonde haired big boobed teacher Jan Dennis and one day after school Phil and Jan went to a coffee lounge in Richmond and then went to Jan's house where they drank beer and then Jan unbuttoned Phil's shirt exposing his awesome massive jet black hairy chest and she then rubbed her gigantic pale boobs against his chest - after this Jan lied on her back with her legs spread wide open and Phil drilled his hard throbbing 8 inch long jet black hairy thick cut teenage cock deep inside her soaking wet blonde hairy cunt which was awash with a lava flow of rich hot cock cream

It is on for young and old at the home of AFL star Callen Ward and his stunning wife Ruby Keddie and their love making is super hot - they get in to 69 position and as Ruby takes in her mouth Cal's rock hard 8 inch long blonde hairy thick uncut cock Cal licks out het hot wet dark hairy cunt and then Ruby lowers herself on to Cal's cock and jumps up and down on it saying "I am going to bust fill my pussy with your hot cum" and Cal's cock explodes filling her pussy with a torrent of horny hot cum

Robin Gardner hit pay dirt when she went to a pick up joint one night and was chattered up by a vey hot looking guy Luke who had short heavily gelled jet black spiky hair and 5 day jet black stubble and after plenty of drinks they went to Robin's house where they drank wine and pashed off and then they undressed each other and Robin rubbed her sexy pale boobs against Luke's beautiful thick jet black hairy chest - this was followed by steamy 69 style oral sex and then Robin lied on her back with her legs spread wide open and Luke rammed his rock hard 9 inch long jet black hairy thick uncut cock deep inside her soaking wet red hairy cunt giving her multiple mind and cunt blowing orgasms

danielle taylor, one hot milf,,there were a few in my neighborhood,,,army wives,,husbands away on duty,,they were alone,,good story liked it..

Lame fantasy

This is well thought out story, a nice teenage fantasy, not lame at all. Well done. Worth 5 stars!!

Good, but way too short! by now, chris should have been back fucking Mrs. Janzen, and finding out about all the things he could do with that resurgent cock of his, like, for example, how many beautiful "older women", wanting to invigorate their young fuckstick, will let him fill their ass with cock, especially after they have first gotten their pussy creamed, and/or eaten out. Mrs' Taylor certainly looks like the kind and size of woman that would make a perfect ass-fuck for Chris, especially since she is unlikely to let her neglectful husband do her ass, and she would want young Chris to be coming back to her for more! And I'm still waiting for Chris to find a way to fuck his big-busty Teacher from Ch 1! But still Thanks for the continuing good read.

A 'well thought out' story? Really? Basically, he just fucks ever adult woman in his zip code and they all lie down for him like dominoes. Just some kid's fantasy, with zero believable content.

DANNIEL TAYLOR IS ONE HOT FUCKING CUNT FIVE STARS SHE NEEDS HER. PUSSY ATE A COUPLE TIMES A.DAY. SHE IS NOT BEING TAKEN CARE. OF BY HER DIMWIT HUBBY SHE NEEDS TO BE FUCKED AT LEAST 3 times a day and kept pregnant for the next ten years.

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Very good stroke story chapter. Friend's hot MILF wants it, every young man's fantasy come true. Looking forward to reading more of Chris' adventures. I applaud and appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

Five Stars She is one Hot MILF she sue likes to Fuck RW

Imagine after she finds out she pregnant years down the road they baby she gets pregnant with grows up and says you’re not my dad after doing a twenty three and me kit

Again 3 stars. I really don’t like the cheating. I wish they were all widowed or divorced. Same hotness with no cheating.

Bill S.

MUCH better writing. The story could have gone longer, especially since nobody would be coming home to interrupt them. Maybe she could have introduced him to anal. Still stirred my loins, though.

Pity she's shaved...milf should have lush neatly trimmed muffins...like sponges for their pheromones....

More super hot MILF banging. Way to go, Chris!

Good story, but it needs more finesse in language and descriptions. And an edit for English issues!

SO MANY mistakes! Plus she doesn't correct him in the shower when he calls her "Ma'am" (which is spelled wrong)!

In my dreams...

Great chapter!

English usage and vocabulary need work, but the author still creates some very erotic images in the readers mind.