All Comments on 'The Initiation Ceremony'

I also have many fantasies about a sexy woman turning me into her own cock sucking sissy who sucks cock for her pleasure and eagerly licks her cum filled pussy. Mmmmm yummmmm.

Love to be husband and sissy trans slut for any and all

Badly conceived, poorly written and so implausible I'm still laughing at how ridiculous it was.

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I loved this story ... your writing skills are only surpassed by your amazing imagination ... I am a lifelong Crossdresser and very Bi-Sexual ... This kind of situation is exactly like most of my fantasies, dreams and desires. The thrill I received while reading this story is indescribable ...

Please continue to share your writing talents and amazing gift of imagination with us.

An Admirer and Fan,

Michelle Jo

Hi Michelle, love you to fuck Jo and me. Love to see you in Jo's sheer black stockings and pink panties sliding in and out of her pussy. Then when you ejaculated I'd eat your cream pie from Jo's pussy and then lick your cock back to life. Then, as Jo gave you oral and flicked your nipples, I - wearing my navy blue nurse's uniform, black stockings and red silky panties and push-up bra would put my sissy cock in your lovely ass and fuck you into my naughty's wife's mouth xxxx

I guess, but again, no build on characters. I gave it 5 for your effort. a guy that was not even into panties, not even sure why he was aroused by his wife's, follows her with the knowledge that there are going to be many people there, and she is a willing guest. is his goal to rescue her, or join her? that I couldn't figure out. if it was rescue, then he went completely unprepared. if it was to join then why didn't he dress accordingly? excuse me people, I'm here to claim My WIFE, for my own, as mistress or what ever she wants, not to be your slut. that would go over well. totally unprepared.

Had a dream last night Betabrad in which Jo, my hot, naughty, sexy wife dressed us both as French maids and persuaded us to fuck each other in front of her and several of her male colleagues. She had sex with all of them in front of us both and then we had to clean her up and eat their cream pies from her gorgeous pussy. We shared cum kisses and then I watched as you fucked my wife before I cleaned both you and her. It was so fucking hot. I loved watching you fuck Jo and I loved having your cock in my mouth xx

This isn't fantasy,or anything other than another man-hating pile of shit! ~ You want a proper ending?Have Daniel show up at bitchie witchie's hen party packing an AK-47 and then blow all the sickos to smitherines! Especially Carrie and his piece of shit cheating wife!

Then gets a gun and kills them all for exposing him to all the nasty diseases they have. Ugly story.

2nd read, and it's still good. I sometimes get lost in a story, and become one of the characters, sometimes that's good, sometimes not. The thing is the reader has to remember this is a story, not necessarily factual.

I hold a marriage pretty sacred. Marriage has 3 keys, Trust, and Respect, and last but certainly not least is Communication. The wife would not talk to her husband in what she thought or wanted, or even desires, or concerns. Would it have been any different if he Hypnotized her into becoming a slut so he could divorce her, or given her drugs to make her do some things that he could use to get a conviction of adultery.

What if, he had been crossdressing all his life but never told his wife? I have read many stories where the author said that he was cheating, because he didn't give all of himself to the marriage, or at least inform her before they where married, he was at fault.

I liked the story, and yes, my panty did get wet. More to the point. As much as I enjoyed the tale, if I hadn't been under the spell or whatever it was, there would have been some really hurting, disfigured people down on the ground trying to recover what was missing from their bodies, my loving wife along with them. You don't take someone's wife turn her into a slut and expect to get away scot free.

Kill yourself married poof guy. I SAID KILL YOURSELF NOW POOF BOY CUM SUCKER.

I gave it a 5 because of the content, not the story line. His marriage was destroyed, for the sole purpose of a witch getting his wife's body(pussy).

Dear author, I do enjoy your stories, so please continue. I would like you to add a their age and location on your stories, because as you may know, people of a certain age and place cant relate to what is happening in your stories. I believe that is part of the reason for some of the comments. I have been a CD/TV since I was 12yo and due to my location (S.W. Pa.), a very conservative part of Pennsylvania. Coming out, or displaying any form of being interested in the finer things was not tolerated. I have been retired for more than a few years, so that gives you a view of the time period.

The stories you write are today and not yesterday, that's why some of the comments are not good. I sensed in this story that the problem started out as a communication problem, but there was more to it, some witch wanted that which wasn't Her's to have. If and or when, the spell is broken, there will be Hell to pay. Perhaps the witch wanted her husband, maybe because of money, social standing, business, who knows.

Its sooo sexy i dress for my wife every evening as a frenchmaid sissy and suck our lovers cock with her i love being her tranny sissy in private and i love dressing as a girl for her ,the world is a more feminine place now thank god and men should serve their wives well and ladies should have many lovers starting from their wedding night lots of love all you sissies and lovely wives from donna cd cuck

I know most of the nasty comments are like 2 years old but i have to say why did you read theose lovely erotic stories if you are not interested in crossdressing cuckold scene.i for one loved this story when jo fantasized about dressing her hubby as a frenchmaid and watch him make love to another crossdresser i almost lost it .i agree with donna cd about couples starting their cuck sex scene on the wedding night why not.my wife knows i wear lingerie and tells me to dress up when shes out with the girls on a night out looking for men.so keep up the good work and please write many more sexy stories xxxxxx