All Comments on 'First Clue'

Thank you for your story. I look forward to reading more.

This was a well written piece of erotica. It can stand alone and we can all use our imaginations, or you can extend the sexy story. I assure you I will be looking for more.

Your writing is really erotic. Your story had a good flow and was HOT! I hope there is a part two soon!!

I love to see beautiful women and my wife knows and points them out to me. I am very lucky! I also got to expose my wife and she exposed herself too; a real turn on for me! Later in our marriage I was also able to share her with one of my friends several times and to me the fun we had ended way too soon! We simply didn't have the opportunities to continue. We are still close friends and enjoy the thoughts of our wonderful times together.

Hopefully just the beginning. I will be watching for more from you.

... but in this instance I'm going to! Such a lovely, sexy story. Thank you.

Nicely simple and understated, but all the more erotic for that. If you do find you can write more on this theme I'm sure I will enjoy reading it.

Also loved the self-examination that went on. Anything that goes on between just the two of them would be fresh and fun.

My wife does flash her panties often. She says it is by accident but I know differently as she is always wet afterwards. I hope she lets some guy feel her up and finger her.

I loved your story and your writing style. Please write more.

A nice start to a story where is the story?

Let's hear how this progresses...

I thought that was very nice. Very realistic story.

I hope you continue in this style.

I heard the British in my head as I read, it was lovely. The eroticism was well paced and not overbaring in the least. A jolly good read.

Well written and good dialogue.

I hope that you will continue this subtle erotic appraoch.

Good Luck

Richard

I love this start as well as the promise for even better!