All Comments on 'My First Day as a Lesbian Cum Slave'

by broken1477

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Interesting so far..

Keep going on !

franksummersfranksummersabout 10 years ago
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Nice work! Definitely will follow this story.

JoeJetsonJoeJetsonabout 10 years ago
Beautiful Control Scene

Loved it, even though I'm a white heterosexual male

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

Pretty please can we get more of this? Maybe a story three weeks into her 'training' and a story at the end, and then take it from there...?

Midnight_SleeperMidnight_Sleeperabout 10 years ago
OMG

Best story on literotica ever!

Midnight_SleeperMidnight_Sleeperabout 10 years ago
You HAVE to carry this on

Seriously

broken1477broken1477almost 10 years agoAuthor
Thank you

Thanks for the comments. By your suggestions, I have submitted a continuation, it should be approved soon. Enjoy!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
A lighter touch

Audra came very quickly the first time. That is commendable!

Audra could greatly benefit from having a hoodectomy. By removing that excess skin, her throbbing clitoris would be permanently exposed. Her orgasms would come almost instantly. Domme Mistresses pay a heft premium for such performance, you know?

Alyson G.

broken1477broken1477over 9 years agoAuthor
Coming Soon

I have submitted a another continuation of this story and hope to have it approved soon. It will be titled Lesbian Cum Slave Final Exam pt 1. Check back for Audra's next ordeal...

liz33ndliz33ndover 9 years ago
i just found this

And I already love it, I hope its a nice long loving story.. just like it started out to be.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
5/5

I really loved this story.

cal28cal28about 8 years ago
Loved it

I cannot get enough of this story. I read it fr the first time last week and I've been having dreams about it every night. Dream that wake me up in the middle of the night with a raging hard-on and I have to jerk off while reading it again just to get back to sleep. I've read all parts of this story and love it. I hope some day you will continue it.

DucaDiVizziniDucaDiVizziniabout 6 years ago
Fucking wonderful

So far, this is amazing, Oh, how I wish this was a video!

Thors_FistThors_Fistover 4 years ago
Excellent Work for First Effort

Enjoyed this story. Looking forward to next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Sorry. I didn’t like this at all.

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