All Comments on 'Best Friday Ever Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Ooh!

Can't wait for the next part! I got a little giddy while reading this! :D

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
scorching hot , exquisite

beautifull story , wonderfully illustrated ,

i hope ch02 will get posted , this is one very erotic tale .

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Ch. 2 has been submitted in the meantime: i liked the picture that accompanies the first paragraph (the model was in the same pose as on a nude painting by Modigliani)

:)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Only Part Of A Story

All that detail and preparation, but the story is not developed. It is about 1/5 of a story.

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