All Comments on 'Oral Gifts: A Fair Exchange'

by pixandwords

Sort by:
  • 4 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago

A GOOD AND SAFE WAY

TredigityTredigityover 15 years ago
Wished it was me

I loved this story, because I've wanted to meet a woman just like Lisa. I don't want to cheat on my wife, but it seems like I have to ask to get her to go down on me.

I don't want to cheat on my wife, but I'd love to meet a womon for some mutual oral delights.

CordeliaGreenCordeliaGreenalmost 15 years ago
Hot...and grammatical!

This was hot as hell, and so well-written, too! There's nothing more distracting than being thrown out of a story by hideous spelling and grammar. Your story never did that.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Nice

Very nicely written perhaps get someone to do a spell/grammar check for you though as typos are a bit of a turn off - we all know it's easy to get carried away in the moment though! ;)

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous
userpixandwords@pixandwords
204 Followers
We are both turned on by well-written erotica and have found many hot gems here at Literotica. As a result, we decided to post stories of our own, in the hope that we could provide some arousing stimulation for other visitors to this site. We are fortunate to be sexually a...