All Comments on 'Movie Buff'

The story was wrecked when the use of "come" rather than the commonly known and acceepted "cum" for an orgasm or semen. Shows and author who totally lacks knowledge of the subject.

Very written... In my opinion not wrecked at all

someone's a dork.

come is fine.

jeez louise.

Good story, very sweet two nerds finding love like that almost seem like a real story.

Cum, Come? Not a big deal as long as the readers understood, but use Cum the next time.

Very Good Lay - that is high praise for me! I want to write stories that are plausible, or nearly so.

Cum/come? I've thought long about this. In my early days it was always 'come', & I think I'm too old-fashioned to change: 'cum' just looks wrong when I type it.

Besides, it's so much fun stirring up the trolls!!

A very well written story, clearly two REAL charectors who love each other, and who love learning how to love each other. Wrecked ! ? - Hardly

But Lauren Bacall is not in Casablanca. You write too well to be sloppy with details. I enjoyed that they weren't perfect looking.

Juan2fork, yep, I've mixed up Bogey's leading ladies. I was hoping no one would pick it up before a rewrite.

I will sort it when I've got the end right for a new, longer piece.

And thanks for the praise.

Trite story and references to Casablanca are so wrong. Did Rick ever ask Ilsa if she was on birth control?

Cajun Bill, re-read the story. There's no Rick- that's the point. I think you may have been tricked by the Hollywood glamour factories, unlike these characters.

More please.