All Comments on 'Nude is Naughty Ch. 03'

all three stories made me cum and cum. more of the same. well done

Just finished reading all three Chapters What a brilliant story and SO well written ! Keep It up

I feel that this line of stories has a decent premise, however, could use to be drawn out a bit more. Things seem very rushed in all of the stories. I think you could benefit from being more descriptive with them, and having things go a bit more slowly.

Errors in story: nudity does not equal wild sex with young attractive women. To make it more interesting, he could change the 2 young ladies to 2 older women, such as his aunts--see the Aunts Go Camping story for some good ideas on how to build up the tension.

One thing I noticed is that ginger called her mom. Was that an oversight or something else?