All Comments on 'Lea's Capture Ch. 01'

by MasonFoster

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Interesting!

I gave 5 stars. I think the chapter was too short, but I hope you will update soon as I'd like to know what happens next. 'Sir' seems very gentle for someone who kidnapped Lea, however that may be a good thing with him getting her to trust him.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
yum.

Love that your taking it slow to start.

DarkestShadeOfRoseDarkestShadeOfRosealmost 10 years ago

Love it, can't wait for more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
story

Not a big lover of wishy washy heroines. no backbone. not bad writing though.

MasonFosterMasonFosteralmost 10 years agoAuthor
Re: Story

Thanks for your comment, Anon! Lea isn't intended to be a heroine... at least, not yet. The character I'm developing isn't going to be passive forever!

writing3342writing3342almost 10 years ago
Love love love!

Can't wait for more! However, I do think Lea should get a bigger backbone and become less passive. Awesome writing for the start, though!

CuriousMaryCuriousMaryalmost 10 years ago
Anons! Give the author a chance.

MasonFoster is new here and this is her first story ( read the bio ).

Anons tend to rip newbies appart thinking they are doing something useful.

Newsflash, being dense never changed the world. Nor expecting more from a free story.

Let's encourage MasonFoster and give her a go.

I see the talent, as well as you all do. Don't rush her into your twisted fantasies. Let her get you into her own.

None of the highest rated authors on here write according to anon requests.

PS: My apologies to everyone. I am really bothered by these Anonymous comments from all these "know-it-alls" that rush into ruining a person's spirit.

Are you a well informed and trained writer or an editor?

Is the answer no?

Then why are you giving advice?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
dont normally like stories without any 'action'.....

But with this one im drawn on waiting for more!

really enjoyed this, hoping future chapters are a little longer too

davinedavinealmost 10 years ago
Slow burn.

You write well. I love a story with a long fuse. I often leave a story if the real action starts too quickly. I'm looking forward to more of this story.

fishingrod48fishingrod48almost 10 years ago
Excellent start

Well done keep writing please

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