All Comments on 'An Unforgettable Afternoon'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

Nice storyline looking forward for next posting...do it asap.....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

Very nice start to storyline and interesting picturing of characters. Bring the next part asap...you have established a good foundation for a great and steamy story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
superb,

Takes me back a long way, but had a very similar experience in London when visiting relatives, though still a virgin, but did not get a feel until we got to his home, and it was also BIG.

I lost my cherry two days later and was amazed to have managed such a monster, but being a much older man he was patient and never ever in a hurry.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
princess

to be treated like a princess is magical but its better when you're dressed like a princess

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Keep on writing!

I'd very much like to read more! Being such a mature man's little princess is my wet dream.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Nice start

A very nice start. Looking forward to the next chapter, it should be really hot. Please give us more asap.

mumblegooseeggmumblegooseeggabout 10 years ago
Want more

I'm waiting for the next episode with bated breath. If it lives up to the start, I'll give both a fiv-star rating; else 4 stars for this one.

sticky6sticky6about 10 years ago
great job

Great job at building suspense and sexual tension. Definitely left the hook to keep us reading more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
SO HOT!

Well done.

I do hope you have a second chapter ready - you left us hanging!

MarkbikeMarkbikeover 5 years ago
Toyboy

A delightful read and a slow build up. I now have a throbbing erection that needs dealing with, preferably by this shy, young student sitting on my lap! More please.

petey377petey377about 5 years ago
more

hope the story continues

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Very cute vignette!

Different and fun. Thanks for sharing!

cdCindy1cdCindy1almost 5 years ago
please continue

I can't wait to read what happens next.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Love your story, gave you a 5 (*****)! The storyline was brilliantly conceived & skillfully crafted.

😊

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Perfect!

Perfect so far. I am so hard imagining I am college boy and this man is going to use me!

DiaperboyMiDiaperboyMiover 2 years ago

Wow!!!!! Definitely need more of this!!!!!

MaultascheMaultasche9 months ago

Very arousing story! Made me soooo hard and horny!

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