All Comments on 'Fun and Fornication Ch. 04'

You did it. You captured the formality and stiffness of the English in a most amusing way with the "Fun and Fornication" of the noble class. Your character development was beyond excellent. A solid 5 stars for an elegant presentation. My only suggestion is a better proof-read prior to publication. The mention of a Mrs. Blackwood was a break in an otherwise brilliant and exceptional story. A jolly good read Sir. Few stories are as funny as this one.