All Comments on 'Cindy's Adventures in NYC Ch. 05'

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skyicewolfskyicewolfabout 10 years ago

Not as good as previous ones. Make them longer, more similar to the other ones please.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

thank you for continuing this story series. it is my favourite and I realy liked the new chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Great Chapter

Very nice installment in an awesome series. The interaction between Cindy and the guys in the first part was great. A bit more detail on the Asian girl would have been nice. Can't wait to see this story continue. The characters are fantastic.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
ready for the next chapter please

I'm really enjoying this story so please don't be one of those writers who start something and then fail to finish it, for whatever reason.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Duh!

There likely no girl this stupid in the world, but you found her in your mind.

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