All Comments on 'We're Not Human Anymore'

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CleardaynowCleardaynowabout 10 years ago
Interesting

I like this the best of your recent poems.

There are interesting structures and pictures developed.

Not sure that using 'smell' in the third verse to rhyme with hell fits.

I do wonder what Edeltraud would say on the subject of Pelegrino?

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