All Comments on 'Tempted and Teased in Texas Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
great start

Great start to a true teasing series. Please continue with all the characters - more fun to cum lol

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
PROOF READ!!!!!

Example - " I admired how tighter her body was as she applied lotion to her legs."

'tighter'? Absolutely does not fit the sentence!! 'tight' perhaps, 'tighter' definitely not.

Several other silly errors that a simple reading of what you had ACTUALLY written, as opposed to what you intended to write, should have eliminated!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Very exciting

but chapters need to be longer!

writemarksmithwritemarksmithabout 10 years agoAuthor
Proof read?

Will try to do better but would encourage you to read other stories if typos offend you so.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
great story

Love the story.. It has great characters and a good story line. Please continue.

rightbankrightbankover 9 years ago
the game is afoot

and the hens are chasing the fox.

delightful, so far.

btw, what happened to his wife?

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