All Comments on 'Mr. Nice Guy vs. High School Ch. 04'

by EsotericNiceGuy

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kennyboy25kennyboy25about 10 years ago
A worthy addition to a great series

I very much enjoyed your latest chapter. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
I totally forgot about this series

Good to see it is back, for now.

EsotericNiceGuyEsotericNiceGuyabout 10 years agoAuthor
Thanks for the warm reception!

I had a chapter four written forever ago, but editors never seemed interested, I must have sent it to 8 editors, and I had two more installments ready and on hold before I realized their lack or response was probably a sign a rewrite was needed. So I have refocused the character, I've redirected the story to revolve around his highs school relationships and the upcoming party (like the title indicates), and any "mature" stuff will be delayed until after.

More will follow! The old rewrites wont work with the retooling, but I've already started.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

I loved your story. Altough this chapter left me feeling kind of nbad for shyla. I understand that this is a fantasy but I hope you get her into a better place than she is in now.

glycoxxglycoxxabout 10 years ago
editor

Ive been following these stories for awhile. I'd be happy to look them over.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Good story and excellent narration

Please write more frequently.. Looking forward to getting next chapter very soon...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Update.

When is the next chapter coming, if its already done where is it at.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Writer has excellent style of writing and keep it exciting.

Looking forward for continuation of this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Writer has very good style of writing, He should write more, Please...

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