All Comments on 'Mom Is Bound To Please'

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jaybird1944jaybird1944almost 10 years ago
I'm not into bondage, but damn,

this is one hell of a hot story. Terrific from beginning to end. Thanks

mel_pomenemel_pomenealmost 10 years ago
I'm not into Mother-Son stuff ...

... but this was amazing! Thank you and please have five stars for an excellent story - and possibly a new interest for me!

dinkymacdinkymacalmost 10 years ago
Nice!

Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
* * * * *

I can't wait for Chap 2 where Alan slowly fucks Mommy's sweet crinkly asshole!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Truly enjoyable

Start to finish, and I mean Finish, this piece of erotica was a delicious delight.

kplusmckplusmcalmost 10 years ago
amazing story

amazing story hope more chapters to follow

EyelanderEyelanderalmost 10 years ago
Sexy

Mother and son incest i think is the most hottest thing ever, its harder to find a good mom/son incest story these days

Gunslinger002Gunslinger002almost 10 years ago
sequel

add katie to the mix

LittleprickLittleprickalmost 10 years ago
Very hot

For a moment I thought Alan was Katie's boyfriend and Katie, Alan and his mom would have a threesome. If you write another chapter you could throw Katie into the mix.

JohnnyGaltJohnnyGaltalmost 10 years ago
I love Your Work

and have for years

but Please, get an Editor

And for those who complain about "Grammar Nazis", for those of us who know the difference, seeing "mom's" when it should be "moms" completely halts the flow of the story when you try to figure out what belonging to Mom is being referenced

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Superb

Next time she should tie him up. It's what he wants. But it should be face down so she can give him a good, hard spanking until his cheeks are nice and red!

couple4fun4080couple4fun4080almost 10 years ago
awsome

you write the best stories....my wife and I love to read and role play....Keep up the good work.

DirtyAllieDirtyAlliealmost 10 years ago
ohhh

Oh damn that was soooo hot! When Anna was laying there helpless while Alan unbuttoned her blouse and the way you described him exposing her breasts.....I had to stop for a few minutes!

I agree with other posters, Sequel with Katy! She doesn't have to know Alan is her son , Anna can say he is her boy toy and invite Katy to play with them!

live4thebjlive4thebjalmost 10 years ago
Liked it but

There were many things that didn't make sense which took away from the story. You want more details on that feel free to contact me.

NewAnonNewAnonalmost 10 years ago
Wonderful combination

This is a creative and extremely well-written story that combines incest with bondage with great erotic effectiveness. Congratulations to the author!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
A Great story

I hope more chapters follow soon. A Great read. Thank You!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Hot

Loved the story. Wish I had the opportunity with my Mom. She was so sexy and I had many of orgasm fantasizing about her. Still do.

fantasiahottiefantasiahottiealmost 10 years ago
Nailed it again!!!

Amazing job as always! ;)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Hard as a rock and speechless

Very good. I was enthralled the entire time while reading.

You made me want to be Alan.

Good job!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Wow

One of my favs of all times I've been coming to this site for about a year now and this is easily one of the best I've read so far, here's a good idea for a follow up story bring the store clerk in on the action by having the mom tell her she found someone to fulfill her bondage fetish and her "partner" wants someone else join in on the action

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Stopped Reading

The MC was just too boring. I didn't care if she got laid or not.

She's someone who gets off on guys jerking off in a sex shop.

She's so dull she derives her "sexy fantasies" from porn and from copying the clerk in the porn store. "That sounded fun." Hey, I want to try that because they're having fun.

She complains about her dud husband and bf. But what does she have to offer? Porn.

This character is not interesting or compelling enough for erotica.

The only thing that does make sense is her attraction to bondage, because she's so freakin lifeless she needs someone to force sexual excitement out of her.

Its a good thing her son has ready made incest fantasies because where the hell else is any sexual passion going to come from. When you can't create an erotic story, there's always incest!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
awesome

Just wanted to say that was awesome

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Great story

As always, you never fail to create a very arousing story. And to those who complain about you needing an editor, perhaps they should all use correct punctuation and not have run on sentances when criticizing your work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
kinky

Loved the story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Amazing!

I never post comments on stories, but I had to for this one. That was absolutely amazing. It wasn't just "son lusts for mom", "son fucks mom", etc. It was an actual story, and very well written, I must add. I definitely, thoroughly, enjoyed it. Thank you. :)

A_Little_NaughtyA_Little_Naughtyalmost 10 years ago
Wonderful story

I love this story. That's the kind of mom I hope to be when my son is older. In the meantime I can fantasize. Yummmm.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
2nd Chapter

Does "Mom" take her son to visit the lady at the porn shop? That could be a whole new story. The two girls could get into it and maybe bring her boyfriend (who could be her son or brother). This could go into so many different directions.

WoodSmithGuyWoodSmithGuyalmost 10 years ago
Truly a piece of art :)

I've read a couple 'mother/son' stories so far and I've only been here a couple days. I absolutely love your story and OMG the feeling inside is indescribable. If it were a true story it would only add to my excitement. I will certainly be reading more from you. :) 5stars for you

richbwrichbwalmost 10 years ago
nice

great story started a little slow i almost stopped reading it but glad i didnt it got alot better and at first it was sounding like mom was a slut hanging out in a porn shop i hate when moms are made out to be sluts hope theres more to this story its pretty hot so far

richbwrichbwalmost 10 years ago
sweet

hot kinky story hope theres more

dirtyomandirtyomanover 9 years ago
Opinion

I have MY opinion on this story. I think this is one of the best storys on this site. Now you "anons" that don't like it------Who gives a fuck what you think? The author is HOT, their story is HOT !!! My opinion doesn't change those detracters, but I don't care. I want the author to know, I personally think they did a GREAT job with this story!!

Thank You "Lovecraft68" I'll be back to read more of your work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Not my usual fare but..

I have seen the name Lovecraft before and it means taking a look is worthwhile. That is a compliment in case you wonder.

Thank you for a fun story that hits home. Not into incest {wonder if I should be} but there is enough hinted at there to make it understandable.

Good work and Thank You.

KnightlyKnightlyover 9 years ago
Very nice

story was well written, and thought out. I love the Mother/ Son sex, but had never thought of the bondage angle. Now I have fodder for future fantasies. Great job.

PerimedesPerimedesover 9 years ago
Fucking Amazing

Thank you so much for sharing this story with us. I love bondage. The only thing it's missing is some spanking and/or whipping. Oh, and maybe some anal, too! ;o) Maybe a part two. It sounds like there would be a lot of material on the son's videos. I don't mean to sound critical. This was absolutely great as it was. Will Mom tell her friend at the store? Swap videos?

More please... ;oP

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Another enjoyable read

However, to be a bit picky, you, like many other authors, have trouble using "that" for "who". "That" references non-human animals and objects, whereas "who" refers to humans. Big deal, right? Sometimes the misuse affects the meaning of a sentence. For example, in this story you wrote "...not out there on the make like the sluts in the movies that I at times longed to be like". Using "that" instead of "who" makes it read that she longed to be like the movies rather than the sluts.

beretta84beretta84about 9 years ago
assholes.

why does there always have to be an english high brow professor on these sites? who cares if the writer makes an occasional grammatical mistake? who cares what or whom? i don't. & neither do the thousands of other readers on this site.

oh yeah. is it just me or do they always seem to post as anon? there should be a way for them to post as "pinheads".

beretta84beretta84about 9 years ago

great story, i really enjoyed it. at least this one had an acceptable ending.

please keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
My new fave story in this genre!

Holy shit, this was hot. I loved how the sense of taboo was eroded... just the right pace and, at least to me, plausible enough to not detract from the great story. Fantastic job!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Very hot

I loved this story! The idea of them discovering the desire in each other and how hotly they fucked. Now they can fuck each other with freedom in the privacy of their home.

Kitist02Kitist02over 8 years ago
Fit to be Tied

You've pulled out another very fine read. Leading the way into the story through the mother's lame fantasies sets up the final powerful bondage driven incest.

You do these so well. Thank you.

Mommy1979Mommy1979over 8 years ago
Holy Hot!

Wow! I am a huge fan of ur stories. Read this tonight and not only did I cum 4 times, I soaked my bed with squirting everywhere!

nadinephillipsnadinephillipsover 8 years ago
Excellent story

HOT WET DRIPPING...................and that is just me, the story was even better than that. Loved the story and how real it can be. I am process of working my way through more of your stories, excellent and so naughty.....so far loved them all. I hope this one can have many sequels? So many possibilities!! Keep them coming/cumming. Hugs

Leotardstights69Leotardstights69over 8 years ago

Great story loved it 5 ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Amazing

I'm very new to this site, and I am super into the incest category. It's nothing I would ever do, but it's just the thrill of it being so forbidden. Plus I love being tied up so this story just totally did it for me. I've read a lot of stories the past month or so, but I have to say you are by far my favorite author. Even your stories with content I'm not that into, I still love reading them and touching myself to them. Keep writing, you're absolutely amazing. (:

Lobosolo51Lobosolo51almost 8 years ago

Loved it. Some great stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
mothers day card

voted 5. You're slutty, demented, twisted, sick, degenerate, socially unacceptable, a harlot, and a fanfuckingtalented writer!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Very, very good

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
a trill

Nice to understand what you really like, dear LC...and i see why. I don't know if wings can be tied, and that ideea make me ask miself wich is better, a good ride, a good fly...maybe both ?! I think i will read all what you have on Literotica and ask for more. Must be heaven if i see angels, wright ? Bound to please, dear, like you're always here, and i MUSTcome again for more.

Yours,

Trully

G.M.

HornyinDeHornyinDealmost 7 years ago
A hot fantasy

Always love your work, LC, but this may be one of the best. When she finally gave into her lust was amazing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
LOVED IT!!!! Great read...

I rarely say this but I wished it kept going. Selfishly... I would LOVE a sequel. GREAT WORK!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
A woman’s voice - written by...

Dear Author,

What a pleasure you take time with the narrative to develope the mother’s voice her sexual tension and to set up between this can’t be what I want, this is so wrong no son don’t stop -don’t stop! Please! Most of the story is from her point of view her growing erotisized shame. But then the son’s voice is real as well. Very erotic the whole no no I mustn’t please don’t please don’t a little lower son. All in all a pleasure.

I finally landed upon you being a guy writing a woman’s voice (and well). Every now and then you fell into an expression how “tight” your mother’s pussy etc that were suddenly not female. I could be wrong (it has happened). But I would put money on

it. Thanks for the thrills!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
go figure

im gay...never had any sexual desire towards my mother (not even my father) but this made me cum soooo hard! go figure...really!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Hot story

I loved the story but relation build up between son and mom should more.

GiganticGiganticover 5 years ago
Wow Happy Ending

Loved this story and would like to see several more chapters carrying it forward for a while. Possibilities are numerous for continuing this adventure.

FXBradshawFXBradshawover 4 years ago
One of the best

One of the best BDSM/Mommy stories I've ever read. Bravo! Do you have any "Son enslaves Mom" stories?

bumblegrumbumblegrumover 3 years ago
Excellent

I loved the bondage element in this story - not a common theme in your stories, but it certainly added to the erotic pleasure. Many thanks, Lovecraft, your stories are always worth a read, and some feedback. Well worth five stars, more if they were available.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Fantastic story and loved the additional bondage element. Definitely more than 5 stars ;)

IncAddictIncAddictover 3 years ago

Damn so hot and dirty yet so loving! 5 stars from me. Hardly ever disappointed by your stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Owesome story

You did great work author from now on i will read all your story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I'm not fan of BDSM, but on the same note I am not generally repulsed by it, depending on how it's used in a story. But son drugging mom and strapping her to the bed- I'm out. It's also annoying if a straight and vanilla guy is made out to be the bad guy, sort of. I can live with the fact, that people have different preferences, kinks, whatever. I just wished those who demand respect for their orientation would return that same respect, or let's settle for tolerance and acceptance towards others, like mom's lover in this story, who just has no need for kinky play to be content with his sex life.

blackknight314blackknight314over 2 years ago

Great job! Not really a big BDSM fan but I loved this. Thanks so much for sharing this with us.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Hell of a story

Foxterot7aFoxterot7aover 2 years ago

Another exceptional story from this author. The son was mature beyond his age in that he recognized his mother's needs and wants. Did not care for the use of drugs. He could have simply waited for her to go to sleep. How the mother could consider settling into another sexually boring relationship, after just finishing one that lasted 20+ years, is unbelievable. Glad the son had the spine to assume command. Finally, the sexual and emotional epiphany of the mother was beautifully described. Her acceptance/self-awareness of her sexual needs was enjoyable to witness. Like all of this author's other stories, it rates 5 stars. Well done!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

So good. Put me behind thirty minutes on chores. Oh well.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great story! It’s funny that people are butt hurt over a made up story. If the plain vanilla boring guy couldn’t give her what she wanted, he had no business being there with her. So she was right to get rid of this boring ass. The son knew what she wanted, he just had to nudge her that way by getting her drugged so he could tie her up. Obviously it’s exactly what she wanted.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Just fucking awesome. It only could be better if he got her pregnant. But I loved your story just fine. Thank you so much. I must have cum a half dozen times reading this.

Bobbyd629Bobbyd629almost 2 years ago

I totally loved this story, the best one handed story in a long time. Thank you for one hell of a story.

JimDiamondJimDiamondover 1 year ago

That was about as hot an "incest story" as I have read here. If I was not laying here waiting for a lady to come in and crawl on my body I might have even masturbated. Fortunately, I can hear her puttering around getting ready to come in. Seeing the erection standing up she will ask,"is that for me?" I will close the laptop and answer, 'Yes, if that is my breakfast." Then I pull her up to straddle my face. God, I love the smell and taste of warm wet pussy in the morning! So, thank you for the story... :-) If she knew she might thank you as well... :-)

nightdragon1nightdragon1over 1 year ago

wow......that was the best. Hope you have a lot more.....a whole lot more. You are one of the best of the best.

WhiteStockingsWhiteStockingsover 1 year ago

A great story well told.

Incest or no incest doesn’t matter. It’s a piece of fiction. Fantasies are allowed as long as nobody is hurt. In particular I liked the female figure having an active role. Despite being tied helplessly to her bed later in the story. 😉

OMGMANOMGMANover 1 year ago

Loved this story!

Baqfid12Baqfid1211 months ago

Loved this story! Thanks for writing!

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Not going to rate this story because I wouldn't want to bring the average down. Your writing is wonderful, as always. That said, the drug use on page three - to me at least - throws this into DubCon or NonCon. While the quality is great, it's a story I would *not* have read, had it been tagged with that. Hardly the end of the world, but something to possibly consider for future pieces. Look forward to whatever you put out next.

KerrionKerrion8 months ago

The writing and story were excellent! 5/5. The only aspect I didn't care for was that he drugged her. He could have simply waited for her to fall asleep on her own. I do like that he didn't molest her after drugging her though.

⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

4chuckssite4chuckssite6 months ago

This was a nice progression from nice girl and nice guy that couldn’t satisfy either mom or son leading to their getting together for the hot sex that both desired. Also a precursor to future relations that both would enjoy. I guess we’ll have to leave the future to our imagination this author does not seem to engage in sequels. Ok by me I’ll let my imagination take over. Good job on this one.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Lovecraft68, 5/5.

Oh shit… where to start, love your work, sometimes I may not like the genre that you’re in but you open new avenues for me to think about. And this is what a good Reading does. This story, though really tore at me. I am not a fan of the drugging, and damn you stopped reading it from that point because that’s not even in a fantasy I want to hear about. But the way you handled it coming out of it took away of most of the taste in my mouth.

I for whatever reason was given the gift (he said with a very sarcastic tone) of premature ejaculation. I can get eight minutes in before I’m done, and that’s on a very good performance. So for me, sometimes a lot of long hours on end sex stories I can’t believe that they go that long, however, having said that… I know that they do. So I get to live vicariously through your stories, and this one took my breath away at the very end.

I found that I was drawn so heavily into the story that my muscles in my chest and my stomach muscles were in knots. And it took me 20 minutes to recover just from reading your story. Thanks is not enough for help what you have written. though I don’t feel as strongly at the endings of all your stories, this one was so powerful that I had to leave a comment, and thank you so deeply for your writing.

It’s the power of the pin, and every once in a while, a person can almost die from it, and die happily. You make me feel so good to ever finish your story to look back on it and feel the romance in it and to only look forward in my mind to the joys of coming in the lives of two characters with fictional lives that you really do. Hope there is a sequel so that you can once again see vicariously where your characters go.

Well done.

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